to death do we part~ the shock and scar of a life time!

to death do we part~ the shock and scar of a life time!

well here you go to death do we part fans! the story has now truly begun! and in a shocking scary way! what will happen when luv become to perfect? what will pervent true luv from suviveing? well read this and the ones to come!

published on March 02, 201314 reads 13 readers 9 completed
the shock and scare of a life time!

the shock and scare of a life time!

Katy took a deep breath in the mirror. Tonight was the most unforeseen night of her life.  She applied shiny lip gloss over her fuchsia lip stick. She took a step back. Even though she would never admit it she looked beautiful in her reddish-pink, short, fluffy, sun dress. Her blood red hair was pulled back so it was half up and half down.  She had on deep sliver high heels. She also wore a sliver long-chained necklace with a bulky heart. Then she had a sliver charm bracelet her grandmother had given her. The bracelet was supposedly cursed so that spirits was everything she did and knew her every emotion when she wore it. “yeah right!” she thought. Then she put on loop earrings. A car horn sounded outside. Another deep breath. She grabbed her clutch bag a hurried down stairs. Her got the door when he was there…… waiting for her…..dressed in a tux…..smelling like spearmint…..smiling. she was there…running to him…dressed in her favorite outfit…smelling like Paris Hilton(perfume)….smileing.  It was her worst enemy.. tyler..and-and-she liked-no loved it! After 3 minutes of staing into each others eyes tyler spoke. “you ready princess?” prin-princess? What had happened to the mean names? Like loser, fatty, stupid, katydid? No, this was a new man, so new names. But was she new to? Katy had changed. over the last month that she and tyler had been friends she had grown to b a happier, stronger, more loving person. To night was there first real date. Tyker walked her to his car. They laughed and talked the whole way to her favorite Chinese restraunt. They talked like 2 close sisters would, besides the fact tyler was a guy, and they were not related. When they finshed eating katy saw just how alike they were….the total same! They agreed on everything! Were they…no…but…no….maybe…don’t be crazy! But it was true they were the perfect match! They walked through the park past the trees, and the playground, the picnic area, past a mini water fall, through the garden, down the street, to a bridge. They stoped in the middle of it and looked out over the pond. “katy?” tyler broke the silence “yes?” asked “do you love me? I mean like really love me?” “o tyler?! Of coarse I do! Ur an amazing man!” “katy?” “hmm?” will-will” “will I what?” tyler took in a deep breath. “will u-“ deep breath, then a whisper…..”WHAT?!” tyler looked sad “I mean tyler, im sorry!  Its just, its our first date were not even boyfriend girlfriend! Are you sure?!” “katy, I have loved u since I first saw u! ive know since then that u were the one! I have no dimon ring, nor do I have the money for one but..” he got on his kness and took katys hand “katy? Will you please, please marry me?!” just then something or someone screamed. Kayt and tyler looked just in time to see a dark figure zooming in the air towards them, they ducked, it missed and disappeared. “WHAT IN GODS NAME WAS THAT THING!!” the both shouted.  An hour later after they decided it was some prank, katy was walked to her front door by her fiancé. (5 hours later) “katy…..katy… you will die for this! Katy…how dare you!” the devil raged you and ur little boyfriend shall die if it’s the last thing I do!” then her grandmother faint voice,” katy be strong what you are about to endor is going to change you forevry, trust in  ur love….katy..katy..”the figure from earlier screamed and came towards her. Katy screamed her self awake! What just happened?!!
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Comments (9)

leprechuan24
they r as of now 16 u really need 2 read ALL of my stories 2understand bcuase they were enemeys at first
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on March 11, 2013
charlie.clements.7
how old are they?
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on March 10, 2013
charlie.clements.7
Awsome but there on there first date hes kinda rushing it but since they grew up together it works
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on March 10, 2013
leprechuan24
thanx 4 the advise!
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on March 04, 2013
remus2009
Great, but you should split a little bit the phrases, by hitting the ENTER key between them, so it will be easier to read and better structured.
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on March 04, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
Lol ok =D
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on March 02, 2013
leprechuan24
ooooo it will! trust me the story has only begun! read my other ones!
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on March 02, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
It's great!!! =D I love it plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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on March 02, 2013
leprechuan24
well here it is!! read up and enjoy!lol!
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on March 02, 2013