Stranger

Stranger

This story is about a girl named Sarah, she's been having dreams of a stranger walking around her home to find her. There's more to this story then this though. So stop reading this and go to the story already.

published on July 24, 20178 reads 4 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 2.

The stranger?

      Sarah tries to call her mom again but she doesn't pick up. She tries texting her saying "Mom, this isn't funny. Where are u?" Sarah waits impatiently for a reply. She hears the window open, and a glass breaking again like yesterday. "No no no no.. What's happening?" She looks to the window and sees a stranger, with a mask? She runs to the closet, horrified by what she saw. Instead of texting her mom, she decides to text her dad. "Dad, there's a man in the house and I think he's after me." She waits for him to be active, then she gets a reply, "Sarah, I'll be home in about 30 minutes, I'll call the police." She puts her phone in her pocket.

      She sits in the closet waiting for the police and her dad, while she hears the man just walking around looking for something. Sarah decides to make the most stupid choice of her life, she quickly opens the doors and runs for it. The man is just staring at her, then he started walking towards her. She suddenly stops, but she wants to keep running. She turns around to see him right in front of her, she couldn't move. She couldn't talk. She couldn't scream. But then she heard, " I got you." The man smiles as he picks up his butcher knife.
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TrashCow
I liked it, but there are a few grammar mistakes that kind of annoyed me. Also, I feel like this story could be longer, with some character details and stuff, ya know? Overall, really good story.
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