Stranger

Stranger

This story is about a girl named Sarah, she's been having dreams of a stranger walking around her home to find her. There's more to this story then this though. So stop reading this and go to the story already.

published on July 24, 20178 reads 4 readers 1 not completed
Chapter 1.

What was that? Where's mom?

       Sarah is laying on her couch watching TV, she should be doing homework. "Go go! No, stupid--!!" Sarah's watching sports at 3:04, she never knew what the witching hour was, and was never into paranormal activity so she doesn't really care. She hears a window open as a glass broke, and she turns the TV off, and hides in her closet. Sarah was home alone, and her phone was on the couch, so she couldn't call anyone for help, or text. She then hears footsteps in the kitchen, but she's too scared to see what it is. You all probably think that this is paranormal activity, don't you? No, it's more like the title. Now, Sarah gained enough courage to get her phone, she felt like she needs to tell someone about this. She tip-toes out of the closet and grabs her phone then runs back. She turns her ringer (or ringtone? Whatever.) -- off, and calls her mom. Her mom didn't pick up so she left a voicemail. "Mom.. If you can hear me I think someone's in the house, I should've locked the windows-- come home when you're done doing whatever you're doing, I'm scared." Sarah puts her phone in her pocket.

       "Oh no... Am I going to be kidnapped? Please say that's not true. Am I being killed? No no Sarah, don't think that way, this will all work out without anyone dying." Sarah thinks. Sarah ends up falling sleeping in the closet, the next day she wakes up on her bed. Wondering what happened, and how she got on her bed, she gets up and opens her window curtains. "Phew, it's morning." Sarah says. "What was that though?" She slowly walks to the kitchen, to see no broken glass and the window is closed. "Oh, mom must've cleaned everything up." Sarah says. She walks to her moms room to see her under the blankets. She jumps on the bed and yells, "Wake up, mom!!" And she swipes the covers off only to see a few pillows looking like it was her mom. "Mom? Wait, where is she then? She should be back!" Sarah says.
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TrashCow
I liked it, but there are a few grammar mistakes that kind of annoyed me. Also, I feel like this story could be longer, with some character details and stuff, ya know? Overall, really good story.
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