Punishment

Punishment

after trying to take over the earth loki has been brought home and not to his punishment choosen by Odin

published on February 16, 201389 reads 38 readers 10 not completed
Chapter 1.

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My heart race the pain of my pasted had come back and I was forced to kneel before my Father.
"Loki I knew I couldn't trust you son I and very.." Odin paused my eyes started to burn as I held the tears back. "Thor I want you to do the punishment my heart would not be able to handle it" Odin said as he held his heart and a tears ran down his face. I knew I would not be loved anymore as if I ever was. My heart was burning as if I was dying as I closed my eyes hard waiting for Thor to grab the chain that hung around my neck. There was a short tug as I scramble to my feet with thinking about the pain. I looked up to see if Thor was even looking at me but he wasn't his brotherly comfort left him and I only felt hatred. The big gray cell bars made a bloody death noise as Thor yanked it open. He yanked the chain so I would come face to face with him "Loki I.." he took a deep breath a shoved me to the frozen cold floor. He toke one more look at me a shut the door to get the string and needle, I almost let myself go feeling all this hatred killed me I wanted to feel loved that’s all I ever wanted my whole life was I lie that felt like an axe going through my head. Hugging my knees the chain around my neck was hung up by the wall to my right my heart was bleeding for love I just want to have a loving family not this I’m sorry Thor I’m so sorry...
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Stars_In_The_Sky
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on February 26, 2014
Pinkheels
What did Loki do to deserve this??? (Or am i missing a chapter...?)
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on September 06, 2013
Pinkheels
Aye ie ie! So sad and... SAD!
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on September 06, 2013
JeanKirschtein
ok i will try when i have time which i hopefully will have
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on June 04, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
You should write more!!!!
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on June 02, 2013
fleur22045
gosh, this so sad
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on May 01, 2013
JeanKirschtein
ok their will most likey be more
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on March 01, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it! If there is any more to the story, please write it.
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on March 01, 2013
saphoravampire
that is very good i think you have found your passion
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on March 01, 2013
JeanKirschtein
please comment or rate
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on February 17, 2013