The Break

The Break

please enjoy i wrote this story before in my note book where i keep tons more so please tell me if its good and i will add the rest!

published on January 28, 20139 reads 8 readers 6 completed
The break

The break

Holding in my breathe was probably the most stupidest thing i could do it just made my heart beat faster. The score was 10-10 one more point and my team wins. Thinking that i was nexted was nerve breaking. "Nickolas" I heared the score keeper yell with his microphone. Stepping up to the two bars that were hung above me were higher than normal. All i had to do was jump up and swing from one to the other and stick my landing. Before i could start i look at my coach who was yelling at me in encouragement. But i couldn't hear i was to fouced on this act. The timer was set 3mins. The score kepping turn score back to zero. I could almost feel every single eye one me. My world started to race now. "ready?" the score man asked I swalled hard and shoke me head to say yes.I swung my arms infront of me so that i could jump higher. "ready and go!" the man yelled. I let my feet leave the ground as my hands reached the bottom bar sending my body flipping the timer reached 2mins At this rate i knew i wasn't going to make it. I gathered my braveness and swong to reach the top bar. The timer was about to beep as my hands left the bar so i could stick my landing. one foot landed but the other one flip to the side making me fall to the ground. There was a horrible pain in my right ankle making my eyes water. I wasn't even going to dare look.
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ChokolatLover
I say this every time, more pls!
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on August 16, 2013
Assassin
THANKS!!!!
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on January 29, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love it! You are a great writer, you know that?
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on January 29, 2013
Assassin
ok i will right more some time
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on January 28, 2013
chanycol
me want to read more
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on January 28, 2013
Assassin
please comment!!
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on January 28, 2013