thebasement

thebasement

i found this in my locker...i wrote it like two years ago... its not finished yet.

published on April 27, 201452 reads 23 readers 10 completed
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Chapter 4.

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(a/n soo soorryy im back now k?)

They both looked at me confused. "Are you serious?" Asher asked. Then he walked towards me and whispered in my ear, his breath hot on my neck. "I don't want to lose you." Before i knew what i was doing my arms were around him. "Then come with me."

**Time bounce**
Amber's hands shook as She opened the door to the basement. This was to much for her. My heart was pounding but i grabbed my friends and we plunged into the darkness.

It was different than before. Nobody was grabbing at my ankles. Nobody was being pulled away from me. The door behind us slammed shut and Asher reached for my hand. I couldn't see anything so i pulled out my phone for light. We walked around in the darkness our footsteps echoing for what seemed like forever. My phone went ding and i dropped it. Amber picked it up. I had a message.

WELCOME TO MY LITTLE AMUSEMENT PARK, MY SWEETS

**im just going to end this story here cuz i have like ten more WAAAYYY better ones im working on... K?
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CrystalWings
5★
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on August 11, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Please write more, this story is so good!
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on August 11, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
Please More
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on June 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!
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on April 29, 2014
NeonTiger
nice
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on April 29, 2014
xKenziex
the four rings are later i think... i really dont remember i wrote it like 2 yrs ago... cool ideas tho.. i might use one if thats ok...
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on April 27, 2014
Nightcat
That's so cool......
Nice plot what's the four rings four? Maybe they give you power but eventually turn you into something inhuman.......
Or maybe they're the only way to free Joey
Or maybe they are linked to the four main characters and give information about them they never knew
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on April 27, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome! I can't wait to see what happens to Joey!
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on April 27, 2014
xKenziex
i'll write more tonite...
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on April 27, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
OMG! This is really good PLEASE write more! Before the suspense get's to me!
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on April 27, 2014