Paper Airplanes

Paper Airplanes

Two balconies away, a girl sits quietly. The boy took his piece of paper, and started folding it.

published on February 17, 201659 reads 17 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 3.
Chapter 3

Chapter 3

        Cleo sat at the table with her sister. “Olivia, count with me. If three plus three is six, than what is three plus six?”
        Olivia put her tiny, six-year-old hands in front of her with her fingers outstretched. Cleo tapped each finger as her sister counted out loud. “One… two… three… fi—“ She shook her head—“FOUR… five… six… ei—SEVEN… eight… nine.”
        “So three plus six equals?” Cleo prodded.
        “Nine!” Olivia said triumphantly. “Three plus six equals nine!” She quickly scribbled “3+6=9” on her first grade paper.
        Cleo smiled. “Good job, Oli. Now, what else do you have?”
        “Nothing. I finished my spelling at school.”
        “Oh. Okay.” She tried to keep the relief from flooding out of her voice. Tonight, the last thing she wanted to do was little kid homework. She had enough of her own to worry about. “Olivia, get to bed, okay?”
        Olivia nodded. It seemed as if the one thing that went right in Cleo’s life was that she had a great little sister. Olivia always listened, and she very rarely argued.
        “G’night, Cleo.”
        “Good night, Oli. Sleep tight.”
        “I will.” The first grader ran to her room.
        Cleo sighed and took out her backpack. Her HEAVY backpack. She yanked her literature book out with some difficulty and set it on the table. Instead of doing anything, she just stared at the book, her dyslexia making the order of the letters swivel around, and making her waste time trying to decipher the words. Writing was no problem for her, but reading? That’s a whole other story.
        She gazed at the book, trying to read, which was like decoding Greek to her. Eventually, she gave up, letting her mind wander.

        Why did he leave?
        We were happy.
        He ruined our family.
        Was it because of me?

        Cleo shook her head, trying to clear the thoughts that killed her. She couldn’t think about that.  Right now, she had to think about how she would survive the school day tomorrow.
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Jump4theSun
Oh my GOODNESS This was AMAZING!! Super awesome. ????
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on August 21, 2018
All_hail_Melon_King
So chapter 5 is where Jordan builds paper airplanes?
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on December 23, 2016
Sliversplashthecat
More! This is great hope you write more soon!
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on May 11, 2016
Dei_Dei
Lovely story! I've added it to my favourites, so get writing!

Constructive criticism: You should make your chapters about 100 words longer.
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on February 19, 2016
ELINAviolets
That was so cute O^O loving the story X3
I hope you make more chapters ^-^

Well as a writer you probably want crittesism, so here :3

The story description is short & simple, yet lovely cute and got me interested. The chapters themself are pretty short, but since this is probably something you write for fun, and if you instead make more chapters instead of more See More▼
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DontMindMyAwesome
Thanks! It means a lot! :)
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on February 18, 2016
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on February 17, 2016
vive_la_revolution
MORE
I NEED MORE
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DontMindMyAwesome
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on February 17, 2016
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on February 17, 2016
vive_la_revolution
MORREEEEE
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DontMindMyAwesome
I just put in Chapter 2!
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vive_la_revolution
YAYYY!!!!
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on February 17, 2016
DontMindMyAwesome
XD Okay. I'm working on chapter 3.
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on February 17, 2016
vive_la_revolution
I just read it.

MOORREEEE!!!!!!!
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