High School Life

High School Life

This story is about a young girl named Haven trying to survive high school. She is not very popular and is bullied frequently. With the help of her friends, she survives every day but hating herself over everything the bullies do to her. On the first day of school, she has received a mystery note. She is unaware of who it is but thinks who it is. With the new boy's arrival, her life begins to change. A long waited crush begins talking to her more while the new boy becomes closer to her heart. Will school be different for her this year, or will something change everything?

published on April 26, 2014205 reads 40 readers 37 not completed
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Chapter 16.
Our Dream Date

Our Dream Date

Ever since that day with Kim, Kim and I had been closer together than anything before. Kim and I have been coming to each others houses and hanging out more than we ever had. Mainly, since when I read that text about her wanting to kill herself, I could not forgive myself knowing she would be gone over something that involved me.

Along with that night, Zero kept his promise and told everyone about Kim and some how got me in it. Before he could tell Robert, Kim talked to him the next day and explained everything to Robert. Robert was angry, but he decided only to be friends with Kim from here on out. Now, due to Zero's little action, Kim has been bullied by many girls. They have sent notes like "whore", "bitch", "slut" and many others along with writings on her locker. Kim laughed at it, but inside, I think she hated it.

Also, Zero got me by letting everyone think I am a heart breaker. Zero has been pretending to be upset because of Dakota and my relationship. We are not even dating! But, Jennifer and her friends have been bullying me worse than ever. I don't care though. They are just jealous.

Standing in front of my locker, I scavenged for my English book when I felt a hand cover my hands. The hand was warm and strong as my vision disappeared. "Guess who?" I heard the voice say as he pulled me in closer to his broad chiseled body.

A smiled shined on my face when I realized the boy's voice. "Dakota." I answered as he twirled me around in front of him. My brown eyes were locked into his green eyes while my cheeks began to shine red. Our faces were close together, and for some reason the teachers were not around. This school really does not care.

"Ding. Ding. We have a winner. Here is your prize." Dakota said as a pulled a car out of his pocket. The card was a normal wbite paper card with my name in the front.

Opening up the card, the sloppy hand writing said, "Hello, beautiful. Will you do me the honor of going out on a date with me? I would like the rest of my day to be amazing, and with you it will be complete."

I smiled at him and nodded yes. I could feel my cheeks shining bright red. Dakota is so sweet. With a smile covering his face, he commented, "Great. I'll pick you up at 6." Grabbing my hand, he placed a soft kiss on my knuckles and walked to his next class. I never even my wildest dreams knew of guys being so sweet.

Shutting my locker, I held the note tight in my hand. As I walked through the hallway, I caught a glimpse of Zero. Just a little glimpse nothing really special. I honestly can not stand him any more. I used to have the biggest crush on him, but now I can not even stand the thought of him. Rolling my eyes, I walked past Zero with my head held high. I thought I knew Zero. Well, I was wrong.


After school was over, David and I walked home like we normally do. Even though we can not afford another car, I like us walking home unless it rains. Then, I hate it. Turning to David, I smilied and said, "So, who you going to Prom with?"

Raising up his right hand, he answered, "My right hand. She is amazing."

Slapping him on the shoulder, I ignored his dirty thoughts and roared, "That is gross! But, seriously who?"

"I was thinking about Bryce." David shrugged. Bryce was a red haired in math class. They always talked and flirted, so she was my first pick on who he would ask. Bryce is mainly known for being the pitcher for the fast pitch softball team.

"I knew you would pick her! I knew it." I started bouncing around. David grabbed my hair to try and make he stop. I guess I was embarrassing him.

"Calm down, little bit. Damn." David shook his head in disappointment as I noticed his cheeks were flustered. "I'm not even going to ask you."

"You already know don't you?" I smiled as did the whole school know. I just wish he would hurry up and ask. Maybe he will tonight. Arriving at the house, I hurried to my room and glared in my mirror. My light assortment of makeup still covered my face and looked good. My hair was still straight from this morning. All I really had to do was pick out an outfit. Looking in my closet, I found black shorts and a black tank top. Searching some more, I found a long sleeve over shirt to cover the tank top. Slipping my outfit on, I then found some black flats to complete the outfit. Glaring at the clock, I realized that I had two more hours till the date.

What do I do for two hours? Plugging my earphones into my IPod, I started going through my arrangement of Imagine Dragon's songs. Their music just relates to me so much. I really wish I could see them in concert one day, but that is just a dream.

Rolling to my side, I felt my eyes grow heavy and tired. Closing my eyes, I thoguht I would take a nap. As soon as I closed my eyes, I was fast asleep. Suddenly, I was surrounded in an assortment of candles and rose petals. Raising up from my bed, I searched around to find out who could of done this beautiful decor, but why is it in my room?

Jumping off of my bed, I searched around to find the mysterious person who did this. As I walked out of my room, I noticed the rose petals leading me to where I should go. As I followed them, I arrived in the kitchen where a steak dinner was sitting on the table with a rose in the middle. I was the only one in the room. No one else was in here. I wonder where the stranger is.

Suddenly, I felt someone wrap their muscular arms around me squeezing me into them. My pulse began to rise as I felt our bodies so close together. With the stranger's lips pressing against my ear, I heard him say, "Do you like it, Haven? I worked hard."

Turning me around, I saw Dakota smiling at me in a blue button up shirt. His hair was combed better than normally is. My face started burning red as I realized he had done all this work for our date. It was perfect. "I love it." I told him as our eyes stared into each other's.

"I'm glad." He said cupping my chin. I saw his eyes closing as our faces grew closer to get other. Watching his lips, I noticed how close they were getting to mine as I closed my eyes.
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
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I love it keep updating plz
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on February 21, 2015
Jeweled_Feather
I love it! Keep updating!
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Jeweled_Feather
Okay. :)
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on February 21, 2015
DarkAngel1204
Ok I will :)
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
Awesome, I just can't get enough
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DarkAngel1204
Well thanks :) I tried to write as much as I could :)
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
AWESOME STORY
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DarkAngel1204
Thanks :)
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Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
MORE MORE YOU NEED MORE THAN 11 CHAPTERS
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on February 21, 2015
Fandomgirlwholoveseverything
Awesome story, more more
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on February 20, 2015
Sarcastic_Newsie
MORE!!
pwease and cheese
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DarkAngel1204
Haha ok :) I will!
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on January 16, 2015
DarkAngel1204
Ha yes I haven't had wifi to post the next chapter
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on January 16, 2015
Sarcastic_Newsie
are you still working? :3
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on January 16, 2015
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yayayyyy
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on December 31, 2014
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Sarcastic_Newsie
amazing story ur a good writer and ... DUN DUN DUN!!! because of...


but it went straight at Zero's head.


DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DarkAngel1204
Aw thank you :)
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DarkAngel1204
Yes I will!
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on December 29, 2014
Sarcastic_Newsie
and also if u don't mind can u start working on the next chapter??
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on December 28, 2014
Sarcastic_Newsie
your welcome
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on December 28, 2014
DarkAngel1204
New chapter is out! :) enjoy!
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on October 12, 2014
Quincy
sorry i didn't mean to like make the same thing as you but this inspired me to make something like this sorry i didn't mean to:(
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DarkAngel1204
Hey that's fine don't worry about. Make yours and have fun.
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on October 12, 2014
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Quincy
Wow love this story you are very talented
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DarkAngel1204
Really??? Oh lord I never thought of that!
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DarkAngel1204
I never really thought of it like that before
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on October 11, 2014
Quincy
but there looks are diffrant zero seems to look like edward and dakota seems to look like jacob in my head
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on October 11, 2014
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on October 11, 2014
Quincy
you know zero is like jacob and dakota is like edward in twilight
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on October 11, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Thank you! I'll keep writing but im on vacation and don't have time lol
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on June 05, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I will. I might finish it tomorrow
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on May 14, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I like this story, you are obviously a talented author! Please write more, because this is really good!
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on April 29, 2014