My Poetry and the Like

My Poetry and the Like

Title's pretty self-explanatory. This ranges a lot from dark and scary to light and happy!

published on April 15, 201492 reads 25 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 6.
The Shy Flower

The Shy Flower

She had started to die

Her petals started to brown
And on her pretty face was a frown

I smiled and brightened
But she was too frightened
to lighten

Her life has been hard
It broke into shards
when she was recently scarred
and without any guard

She wanted to wilt
because she had guilt
about letting others tilt

But I knew she was kind
but she had become blind

Now all she knew was me

--- I would like to dedicate this poem to insanitykills99; she is my best friend in the world and she has been given the hardest challenges one could face. I love you, Tarissa and I hope we will always stay the best of friends.
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Comments (9)

MockingjayDistrict
Wow, all these poems are beautiful. I live the way you described Darkness with human traits and characteristics. If I didn't know better I would have thought these poems were written by a professional. You could really become famous from writing!
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Elleyd
Thank you :D
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on July 03, 2014
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on July 03, 2014
Nightcat
whoa...................these are like story-poems :D the language is amazing, description and feels and too much amazing stuff for my brain *bang*
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Elleyd
haha xD and yea the last two arent really poems just descrptions
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 29, 2014
MMMMMMM6
You should definitely submit this to a competition or something. Even if you don't win you will still get your work out there. That's what ive been doing :)
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on June 02, 2014
MissFattyPattyPoo
Cool! I luv them!
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on April 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
You are such an amazing writer! I cannot express in words the extents of your talents! (LOL that sounded like I was some sophisticated British socialite)
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on April 26, 2014
Tariyukimew
beautiful ^~^
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on April 21, 2014
threebeltking
THESE ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 15, 2014