Let Me Die

Let Me Die

17-year old Jamie Collsburg is upset about dying, especially after learning she wasn't supposed to die, her brother was. The unexpected arrival of a innocent girl named Arianna proves that Jamie can reset the story, her fate. And switch places with Arianna in the nick of time. But when it actually happens, Jamie finds what it's like to have a family mourning over another sibling--not good. But she knows she's never going back. And Arianna knows she needs to get back, before the whole world is turned off balance with their disappearance.

published on April 05, 201453 reads 32 readers 6 not completed
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Chapter 4.

It's NOT Nice to be New (Arianna)

The arriving day could've been the annoying day, for all Arianna knew. Just because she wasn't some famous movie star, or a dentist that had been seen by at least a million people, Arianna was as special as a piece of lint at Zahdashian Academy, the name of the academy coming from the town's founder.

And the fact that she lived in the oldest, rumor-filled house now, didn't raise her popularity a single bit. If Nina had been there, she would've said, "You see all those people?? Their called haters. And haters are some sh*t!!" and that would've been it. But no. Nina wasn't there. She was back at Gana Point, probably texting her boyfriend Robin. Robin was pretty cute, but he definitely went better with Nina.

Nina made everything PERFECT.

It was kind of how Nina worked. Sometimes I would see her making a craft--lets say a cootie catcher. The glue would fall, the cutting would shift, and it would look like my usual artwork. She'd leave, and then 2 seconds later, it would look like Leonardo De Vinci had stormed his magical, professional paintbrush all around it. The same thing worked with boys...except Austin Mahone would replace Vinci. I walked through the glass hallways, observing everyone from a different view. Suddenly, I bumped into a girl with short black hair. "Excuse me" I squeezed behind her.

She turned my shoulder around and her dark black eyes stared into my light green ones. "Jamie wants to be you" and that was it. Was it a Zahdashian joke to mess with the new kid? I walked away, breathing heavily.
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stuck.in.a.creepy.house
1. There will be romance, and I'm not sure in which particular chapters, but I'm thinking maybe in between her school time and trying to go back to Earth.
2. I can't answer this, as it would be a spoiler, but it is a connection to the story.
3. Of course!! I will make a page where you can post them. I can't make a link to it, so here's a deal. I will get 10 new See More▼
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on April 07, 2014
DanielleCim
This is like, the only story I want to keep reading on here, because you always leave us waiting for more, each chapter. I just have a few questions:
1. Will there be romance, and if so in which chapters??
2. How come Arianna has a suspicion of her parent's job? Is it part of the story or a distraction mystery?
3. Can WE come up with a few of the characters?
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on April 07, 2014
stuck.in.a.creepy.house
Thank you :p
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on April 05, 2014
madison1
Good!
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on April 05, 2014
stuck.in.a.creepy.house
It's a top priority!!
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on April 05, 2014
madison1
Love it you should add more
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on April 05, 2014