Let Me Die

Let Me Die

17-year old Jamie Collsburg is upset about dying, especially after learning she wasn't supposed to die, her brother was. The unexpected arrival of a innocent girl named Arianna proves that Jamie can reset the story, her fate. And switch places with Arianna in the nick of time. But when it actually happens, Jamie finds what it's like to have a family mourning over another sibling--not good. But she knows she's never going back. And Arianna knows she needs to get back, before the whole world is turned off balance with their disappearance.

published on April 05, 201453 reads 32 readers 6 not completed
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Chapter 3.

A Chance (Jamie)

Cheerful voices rang out from outside Jamie's beach house, which she preferred to keep hidden and far away from Heaven's angels and living....er dead spirits. And if there was one thing about Heaven that lifted Jamie's spirit, it would be that there were dead people everywhere, and although death made her feel like a gloomy person, for now, and forever, it meant that she wasn't the only one that felt her pain.

And everyone just HAD to feel her pain.

She hurried out of bed, fully dressed, in a white shirt, and a long black skirt, making her look like a nun. But wasn't she? Being placed in this perfect world, where she couldn't escape, or haunt....

Meggie, my only friend on Heaven, came rushing up to me, in a more normal outfit, a tank top with a skull, and ripped boy shorts. "What's up with you?" Meggie asked. Usually, I would consider it an insult and hit her. But she was just joking. I was always up to something, and it wasn't always good. "Nothing" I walked faster, towards The Eye, the only place in Heaven, where you could view how your family was back on Earth. But before I had died, I had been a serious school hacker. I knew how to see what was going on in my old house, and for some reason, that hacking strategy wanted me. I rushed into The Eye, glad to see that it was totally empty, no guards or people, or anything. I walked up to the crystal ball, Meggie standing at the doorway. I spun it around in my hands, tinkered with the lock, and opened it up.

A swirl of wind blew off Meggie's baseball cap, and I almost lost my bracelet, but there it was, my house. There was a girl there, with flowing red hair and a sprinkle of freckles against her nose. "Name" I whispered. "Arianna Vreth" the ball replied. It all made perfect sense to me right then and there. Of course. Arianna was her way out of her, Arianna was the recarnation of her.
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stuck.in.a.creepy.house
1. There will be romance, and I'm not sure in which particular chapters, but I'm thinking maybe in between her school time and trying to go back to Earth.
2. I can't answer this, as it would be a spoiler, but it is a connection to the story.
3. Of course!! I will make a page where you can post them. I can't make a link to it, so here's a deal. I will get 10 new See More▼
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on April 07, 2014
DanielleCim
This is like, the only story I want to keep reading on here, because you always leave us waiting for more, each chapter. I just have a few questions:
1. Will there be romance, and if so in which chapters??
2. How come Arianna has a suspicion of her parent's job? Is it part of the story or a distraction mystery?
3. Can WE come up with a few of the characters?
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on April 07, 2014
stuck.in.a.creepy.house
Thank you :p
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on April 05, 2014
madison1
Good!
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on April 05, 2014
stuck.in.a.creepy.house
It's a top priority!!
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on April 05, 2014
madison1
Love it you should add more
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on April 05, 2014