Lost (3)

Nilani Crenagal is a Lost. When she was hit by a truck, her brain becomes half alive. When she speaks, it seems like she knows everything. But she can't even think her name. Her mother's name is lost in her brain. She'll say it, but won't be aware. Will she survive in her ever changing world? If you like it, tell me to continue the story.

published on March 25, 20149 reads 5 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.

Home

I enter through the door. A lady hugs me, and then a man. They say how much they've missed me, and they're apparently full of emotion. I decide to look around, and think how about how grateful I am to not see white and gray and machines everywhere.
To have the freedom to move when I choose.
"Mom, I'm fine." Who said that? Was it me? They smile, and then hug me.
"Nilani, welcome home. We know you don't know us. We're your parents. Remember?" The worried look in the women's eyes brings me unexplainable memories of cooking with her. Playing out in the lawn. Watching movies.
"Mom, Dad. Mom, Dad, Mom, Dad." These are the first words I've been aware of. I said them and realized it.
"Nilani!" They both hug me, but I feel numb. Where am I? They lead me to a oddly familiar room, and tell me to sit on the bed. When they leave, I let my tears flow free, mourning my lost memories and awareness.
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Avienexjel
Continue that story!
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on July 16, 2014
Avienexjel
Chapters should be longer. (Sorry if these aren't full sentences...)

Combine first chapter with second. Add third chapter to first.

Great story so far. I love it. Nice. (Which means this is actually a huge compliment because I haven't complimented ANYONE yet. LOL? )
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on July 16, 2014
tuhina
Oh, um thx!
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on March 27, 2014
swageyamatobiyolo
This is a really great story!!
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on March 27, 2014