Hidden Among the trees

A young girl tries to find her way through living in the wild adapting to her new surroundings and dealing with a new relationship. Will she learn or will her past come back to do more than haunt her?

published on April 21, 201418 reads 6 readers 1 not completed
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Chapter 7.

Into The Forest: The Hidden Cave

Neveah's P.O.V.

I had noticed that there was a small pool that looked like it was connected to the ocean water that we can see from the bluffs. The water looked nothing like what we could see from bluffs. From the bluffs the water looked really mucky and gross but from this cave the water was really clear and clean. It was so beautiful I didn't even know that it was so close to our home I think I am going to come here everyday. I really like Damian he is super sweet and I think that he likes me.
"Hey what are you thinking about sweetheart?" Damian asked me as i woke from my deep thoughts.
"Oh nothing just lost in thought i guess."
"Well come on we came down here might as well get in."
"Wait we are going to get in the water why am i wearing this old pair of clothes?"
"We don't want the evidence now do we?"
"I guess not."
"Anyway we don't want your clothes wet and people asking questions in the morning why you have clothes that are almost frozen from the cold night."
"I get it but why are we here now I mean it isn't even midnight yet?"
"Just get in the water before it is to late."
"To late for what?" I ask starting to get into the ,surprisingly warm, water.
"The house initiation."
"House initiation?"
"Yeah you think we come camping just for the fun of getting eatten alive by bugs?"
"I guess not."
"Well if you like this pool we can come more often."
"Really that would be awes..."
Then all of a sudden I was waking up in the tent. I had on my clothes and I wasn't wet at all. I left the tent and the cool, misty mountain air hit me in the face. Everything was in full swing.
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Mermaid0220
Alright got any ideas on what should happen I have had a bit of writers block?
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on May 19, 2014