Kate Tasty

Kate Tasty

This is a Creepypasta-style fan character of mine. I am not very proud of it to be honest, but others might like it. This story is turning out to be kind of long, and most of it isn't even Creepypasta. it is pretty much how my character, Kate, became who she is. (Also, I don't expect it to become an actual Creepypasta.) I hope you enjoy!

published on March 17, 2014129 reads 12 readers 4 not completed
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Chapter 6.
The Survivors: Mackenzie "Find my sister!"

The Survivors: Mackenzie "Find my sister!"

Kate looked into the woman's blind eyes. "Who's there?" Miss Sawyer asked. Cy was the one to answer her.
   "Me, Cy; a young black haired girl, whom I think injured her eye; and a tall brunette man." He then turned back to us. "What are your names?"
   Roger answered for her. "I am Roger Tasty from Tasty Bakes, and this is my daughter, Kate." The woman turned her head in the direction that the voice came from.
   "Tasty Bakes, Huh?" She said thoughtfully, "I think I used to go there once in a while..." Kate was still staring at the woman's eyes, and the red haired boy noticed.
   "Miss Sawyer became blinded when some sparks flew into her eyes during the crash," He explained.
   "Please, call me Rebecca." the blind woman said, "I'm Rebecca Sawyer." The four of them talked for a little while, examining their wounds and mending them as best they could. They had found several first aid kits scattered on the beach, so they had plenty of supplies. Cy insisted upon taking a look at Kate's left eye, no matter how many times she shoved him away, saying she was fine.
   "Say, Cy" Roger said while the boy was wrapping bandages around the gash on Kate's arm, "You're really good with this."
   "Well, I was always fascinated with natural disasters and survival," He replied, "I also went to a private medical school." 'Stupid rich people!' the black haired girl grumbled to herself. They then saw on of the bodies nearby moving. It was a little girl with dark brown hair and a light colored bow. She wore a pink dress. They all approached her, carefully. the little girl turned and saw them. Screaming, she ran away. Kate ran after her, catching up and wrapping her arms around her within moments. 'All of those cake deliveries really paid off!' she thought, surprised at her own speed.
   "Please don't eat me!" the little girl screamed, "Don't eat me!"
   Kate chuckled to herself when she realized the problem. "Hey," she said to get her attention, "hey, why would I eat you?" The girl stopped struggling. Instead, she looked into her red eye, shaking with fright. Cy came rushing forward.
   "See?" he called, "You're going to scare everyone away if you don't let me treat it!"
   "For the last time, I'm fine!" Roger caught up, guiding Rebecca. He went up to her.
   "Hello," he said, "My name is Roger, what's yours?"
   She trembled for a little bit before saying, "M-Mackenzie."
   "Do you have a family, Mackenzie?"
   "Y-Yes. Mom and F-Fiona." Her eyes widen suddenly in panic, "Where's Fiona!?!?"
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tuhina
It's good. :D
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on March 18, 2014
Frostgoddess
Thank you. :)
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on March 17, 2014
Cupcakese
You should really make more, but include more boy things, as long as Kate doesn't become a show-off and goes to my least favorite character in the book. But other than that....TYPE ON!
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on March 17, 2014
Frostgoddess
I am not finished yet ;P still working on it.
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on March 17, 2014