One direction love story

One direction love story

This is a 1d fanfic love story. I am sure that u will like it. Dont forget to rate and comment

published on February 14, 201479 reads 22 readers 4 completed
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Chapter 3.
Louis tomlinson

Louis tomlinson

How you met: You lied in silence, eyes closed, just listening to the natural sounds of the earth...when you heard really annoying voices. All you wanted was quiet, and guys had to come ruin it, like they ruin everything. You stood up, ready to leave, when you were knocked to the ground. You rolled over to face upwards. When you did, you saw the most cutest boy ever."Sorry love, my mates and I were just mucking around, didn't mean to knock you over," he said, his voice sounding as cute as he is, as he extended his hand towards you.You rolled your eyes and flicked his hands away, attempting to not get caught up, and stood to leave. As you were walking away, you felt someone grab you hand. You turned around to see him, the boy that knocked you over, only this time, you were inches from him."I really am sorry," he almost whispered, his voice low and seductive. "Let me make it up."You pushed away from him, about two feet from him. "How do you expect to do that?

"How he asked you out: "Marry me," he said, in a seductive tone, as he stepped closer to you."Sorry, bud," you said, turning around and beginning to walk away. "No can do.""How about dinner then!" he shouted towards you, as you were now fifty metres from him. You nodded, and he fist pumped. "I'm Louis!""_______!" you shouted your name back."That's pretty!" he shouted, now cupping his mouth to make the effect louder. "I'll pick you up tomorrow, seven o'clock...here!"You smiled as you realized he had only just realized that neither of you have each other's numbers or house addresses. You just nodded, not bothering with shouting anymore, and walked away.

First date: You stood in the park, ready for your date with Louis. But he was late. You were beginning to think he stood you up, when you turned around and he stood right there, inches from you, holding flowers."Hey," he said, cheerily."Hi," you breathed. You were kind of uncomfortable with how close this guy sometimes got, and you barely knew him. He smiled, grabbing your hand and pulling you along with him. "Where are we going?""To dinner, silly," he laughed. You ran until you reached the streets, when you began walking so that you wouldn't knock people over. This guy was always so full on. You then heard the screams."Shit," Louis muttered, again beginning to run."What's going on?" you struggled to ask, as you ran alongside Louis."We need to run unless you want to get trampled," Louis told you, picking up speed. You two turned onto a street, and the crowd ran past. Louis shrugged, and continued walking in the direction of which you turned. You and Louis ended up at a quiet restraunt, and entered. You sat at a table and ordered your dinner."What was all that about?" you asked as the waitress left."What?" Louis asked, his eyes hadn't left you since loosing the crazy crowd."Um, those girls chasing after us," you said, rolling your eyes. You wondered if he was being sarcastic about not knowing what just happened."They were chasing after me," Louis corrected as the waitress brought over our drinks. Louis took a sip, continuing on with what he was saying, "I'm kind of famous.""What?" Your eyes widened at his statement. Then it all came together. You thought you were stupid to not realize it at first, and blushed."Don't worry, love," Louis' voice was soft, he placed a hand over yours. "I have the affect of creating a mind blank on women."You smirked, pulling your hand away as you shook your head and leaned back in the chair.*SKIPPING DINNER*You were walking along the beach, hand in hand with Louis. You were talking about random things, much like you did all night. You two sat down, watching the horizon, the stars...just everything. You and Louis were both arguing."Nuh-uh," Louis said, shaking is head."Uh-huh," you countered."No, Spiderman is not better than superman!" Louis whined."Well," you said, lengthening the sound."No," Louis shouted, lying back in the sand. You laughed as he shouted 'never'."If you don't believe me, you can eat sand," you said, throwing sand at him. You two then got into a sand fight, and it got out of control. Louis started chasing you, as you ran away from him after putting sand down is pants. He picked you up and you two fell to the ground in laughter, him lying beneath you. Your face was centimetres from his. you could feel his breath on yours.Your smiles were now gone, replaced with seriousness. Your faces came closer..."Tag, you're it!" You shout, smiling. You stand up quickly and began running. Louis laughed, chasing you. Louis thought he lost you, when he found you sitting on stairs infront of an apartment."This is me," you say, almost disappointed because you knew your date was coming to an end."Oh, well, I guess I'll see you soon, then," Louis said in the same tone of voice. You nodded eagerly, standing up. He smiled, grabbing your hand and pulling you to your feet. You hugged him, ten as you were going to your front door, turned back and kissed him on the cheek, leaving him frozen in place for a few seconds."What was that for?" he asked, his eyes shining.You laughed, pulling open your door. "For a good night.

"First kiss: You and Louis were dating for about a week. You were kind of used to running away from fans, but not really to all the pressures of being a celebrities partner. You were judged for everything you did, and it always seemed to be wrong.You and Louis were walking down the street, leaving a restraunt after having dinner, when an arrogant fan shouted out something towards you two, aimed at you. You turned around to glance at the person who said it, and she glared at you. Louis held you closer."Ignore it, love," Louis whispered in your ear. You continued walking, when you heard a group scream. Rolling your eyes, you and Louis began to run. This is how your dates always ended, it was annoying to you, because all you wanted to do was spend time with Louis without all of this trouble.Louis make a quick turn into an alleyway, and fell to the floor, you on top of him. Louis held a finger to your lips as you waited for the hurried footsteps to pass. You laughed when it all became quiet again. You dug your head into Louis shoulder, both of you still laughing. You were in that position until you both calmed down. You brought your head up, your face millimetres from Louis'. He brushed his hand over your cheek as you breathed lightly. His other hand rested on your waist. You snaked your arms around Louis' neck as you crashed your lips to his.

Break up: You sat in your lounge room, your knees to your chest, your head inbetween your knees. You were crying after reading all the hate from Louis fans you were getting. You heard a knock on the door, but you didn't bother answering. The other members of the group Louis was in walked into your living room."Louis is not with us, _______. He's just gone to get..." Harry trailed off as he saw you in that position."Hey, _______, what's wrong?" Niall asked, coming to sit next to you."Just leave me alone!" you shouted. Niall jumped and stood up, the guys walked out of the room and waited for Louis, hoping for him to calm you down.Louis walked into the lounge room, sitting next to you and hugging you from behind. "Babe, what's wrong?""I can't take it anymore, Louis," you shook your head, crying. "I can't take people saying all of this about me.""You just need to ignore it, love," Louis rested his head on your back. "They're just jealous.""No, Louis," You shouted, pulling away from him. "I can't ignore it. This is just too hard. I can't take it.""But _______," Louis started, but you cut him off."Leave!" you shouted, making him jump. "Please, just leave."You slumped onto the couch as Louis stood up, tears in his eyes. He stood there for a couple more second, wondering wat to say. In the end, he didn't say anything, just walked out of your apartment, slamming the front door in the process.

Make up/Proposal: You walked along the beach, the beach where you and Louis came on your first date. You were about to have your first kiss here, until you started a tag war. You smiled at the memory. You saw a figure in the distance. You didn't think anyone would be here. But then again, you didn't think you could be in a serious relationship three weeks after you had met the guy.The figure in the distance became more clearer and you noticed it was the guy. Louis. For some reason, you continued to walk over to him, and sat down next to him. You didn't know what you were doing. He breathed, he hadn't noticed you were there yet."I'm sorry," you muttered, looking down as Louis looked straight ahead, not bothering to look at you."You hurt me," Louis whispered, his eyes still. You were kind of bothered by the fact that he wouldn't even glance at you."I know," you whispered as Louis did. "Louis?""Hmm," he hummed. He was before in the position that you were in last time your and Louis talked. His knees to his chest, his face resting on his hands that rested on his knees. Now he was in the same positiong as you, legs folded, head hanging low, hands clasped together resting on your ankles."Will you forgive me?" you asked, finishig your question."Depends," he said, shrugging, staring out across the horizon as the sun was setting.You looked out that way, too. "On what?""Marry me?" Louis asked, turning towards you. You smiled, remembering his first request when you first met. Your head hung low as you breathed in deeply, then you threw yourself at Louis, you two rolling in the sand. When you had stopped rolling, you kissed him...passionately.
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Mr.Tomlinson329
Louis Tomlinson<3<3
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BHGIPS01
Do you love me Harry Styles:D
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Joeylover11
YES I LLOVE harry <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 =)
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Joeylover11
MEEE!!!
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