How long will it take?! (Devin)
"How long will this take?!" "Not long. We have the soldiers ready and only need to tame the Blazing Steeds now." said Aidan. "I want to attack now before the Savior comes!" "I am working as fast a s a detective can!" Ugh. Aidan is so protective of himself. But at least he gives me a discount. I hate giving away money. "Master Devin! We see a bright light holding an angel! I think it is Savior!" said a team of scouts. "Release the beast! Wild!" "Yes sir!" This will be interesting.Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
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But maybe with longer chapters...
And I liked how u introduced the characters at the beginning
I love your characters!