The faceless attacker

The faceless attacker

It's a fiction story that's based in the 1800's. It's about village that usually don't have much food supplies. So the villagers decide to go out into a forest to see if their is any food to hunt. That's when they discover the slender thing that's starts slowling killing the villagers. Only a few survivors remain and will soon have to leave the village. Read on to find out

published on December 31, 2012104 reads 33 readers 13 not completed
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Chapter 4.

The Packing

I stood there staring for a moment until " C,mon " my Mum said " We better start packing ". My Dad got his rifle that he has kepted for ages, and a brown sack. ' Where did you get that from " said Mum to Dad.
" I used the last of our money to buy this. We'll need it to put dead animals we hunt in there " replyed Dad. I looked at his rifle and I thought why haven't we gone hunting before? I asked dad.
" Well sweety, there's a a alot of dangerous things in the forest " he answered, a wierd sort of frightened voice. I wondered, there's nothing really dangerous, so what's the problem? But then I realised it could be bears or leporads or other dangerous animals. Although I thought that it was strange because there was obsively gonna be rarely thos animals on a hunting trip. So I asked to see if that's all he's troubling about.
He replyed " Well.....yes ' he said in an unsure voice " Yes don't worry sweety ".
" Do we need to pack anymore? ' interupted Mum.
" I don't think so anymore " said Dad, with his voice changing from uneasy to confident. " Well, let's go " said Mum.
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Comments (13)

Icekiller46
Hey look its Slendy
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on June 11, 2013
Miss.Red
FINISH PLEASE FINISH!!!!
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on June 05, 2013
klovecutie03
*shivers*
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on June 05, 2013
LalaLucy
Go to
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on April 30, 2013
LexiCha
Me too..... except he isn't my FAVE. He is still really awsome.
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on February 16, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
I hope slendy comes out soon!! :-( I love slenderman he's my fav
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on February 08, 2013
LexiCha
OMG you HAVE to finish it!! The EXCITMENT IS GETTING TO ME!! Awsome.
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on February 06, 2013
Lara_Laufeyson
thnx for making this cuz my fave monsters are: Slender and Dracula
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on February 03, 2013
Lara_Laufeyson
Slender
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on February 03, 2013
Jadechloeaxel
Hurry write more
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on January 31, 2013
BlueStripedFox
Oh Yes!! That's really soon!
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on January 26, 2013
XXxSilentHopexXX
It's a good start, when does Slendy come in? =)
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on January 25, 2013
BlueStripedFox
I'll write more of the story soon
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on December 31, 2012