Legend Walkers

Legend Walkers

this story is a short series that will have a new chapter added every week. this is the story about Jake Malorn, an young, 14 year old boy who finds himself in a world in which he and his friends have special powers. but can they put together the puzzle before time runs out?

published on November 09, 201320 reads 11 readers 15 not completed
Chapter 1.
Awakening

Awakening

"wake up Jake, time for school" that's the first thing i can remember: the soft voice of my little sister.
          "what time is it?" i asked. "time to get up, dummy, we're gonna miss the bus." i jumped up, grabbed my clothes from my dresser, and hastily put them on. My Jacket got caught in my shirt, and i took a second to untangle. I turned and saw my sister in my doorway. i jumped up in shock and almost landed on my face. "hurry up Jake." and she ran down the hallway and through the front door. "see you later mom" i waved as i grabbed my backpack and ran out.
          It was cold. "i should have grabbed a jacket" i thought. walking down the driveway toward the parked bus, steam pouring from within. "Jake" said the bus driver "I got something for you, somebody really wanted you to have it, it doesn't look dangerous, but take this. he handed me a large, glass marble tied to a necklace. "He also gave me this" he handed me a note that said "follow your heart, pull the right strings, avoiding the dark will lead to great things- D" "D?" i asked "i don't know, he had his hood up and didn't tell me his name, but he looked OK, i don't know who you are "D" but i could care less, i don't need someone telling me what to do. just that moment, the bus flipped, and i was thrown out of the bus through my window. i stood up, a sharp pain in my side, and looked up, a man with a black robe was standing in front of me
"who are you?" i asked "someone whose been watching for quite some time, thats all you need to know" he ran toward me, and i jumped out of the way
"put on the necklace, and concentrate with your soul" came a small whisper, i don't know what made me do it but i put on the necklace and closed my eyes. the marble on the necklace started glowing, and a long, sliver sword appeared in my hand "silver bane" said the whisper "say this name when you need me" and the gem stopped glowing.
"so its true" said the man in black "the light binder has returned"
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Comments (15)

TricksterOfLife
I saw "Jake" and I screamed that is my name why am I in cringe
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on April 25
CrystalDiamond2323
AWESOME! please write more! Keep me updated!
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Lightstriker195
thx! im coming out with a webcomic, but its a LOOOOONGGG way from being done. Thx for the self esteem
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CrystalDiamond2323
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
Lightstriker195
ill do my best
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CrystalDiamond2323
Yaaay!! You're a really good writer btw
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
Lightstriker195
due to chapter being derleted from my files, and through some requests, im making this a creepy-pasta related story. as in jake encounters people like the slenderman, jtk, smile dog, etc.
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on June 17, 2014
Lightstriker195
any tips, and or requests, for the series?
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on May 13, 2014
Lightstriker195
that what i was ding, only it wasnt n a flash drive
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on January 06, 2014
Parabolic
whoa cool, and I don't know how to save your deleted chapters, they should have saved to your qfeast account,but next time to make sure they don't get deleted, make them in a word dock and save them to a flash drive. Just copy and paste from there!
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on January 03, 2014
Lightstriker195
sorry, i have writers block, and the chapters that were save on my lapop got deleted by a virus, help?
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on December 11, 2013
Lightstriker195
thx for the tips!
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on November 12, 2013
TheGirlwiththeYellowpencil
Its really good, just add capilization on the character's names, but other than that..SO AWESOME AND ORIGINAL
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on November 12, 2013
Lightstriker195
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on November 10, 2013
ActingPower13
ooh nice so far!
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on November 10, 2013