un and aroud

un and aroud

its just something i made up post comment please sit back and relax and read my dearst people who r readin have a nice day

published on February 06, 20137 reads 6 readers 4 completed
Chapter 1.

Fighting

im around this place that hold me
captive
          in pain im bleeding
in hurt i killing
                      in my mind i dont belong
up im gettting up to fight a battle thats not mind im getting up for a love that was once lost but
still
        havent been found
im around the place of misery
                                            my sword whipped clean
but my heart bursting with tears
                                                   the pain is to much to hide so i
fight for what is right and
                                     bring justice to the land
but
      I
dont
         get what i want im depreved form it
                                                               The one that i love will never know
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LiL.Looking
Thank ya
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on February 22, 2013
xKearax
Amazing, as all of your stories...Geez, where do you get the imagination to write that stuff : D
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on February 06, 2013
LiL.Looking
thanks and i know right it is sad but that how i was feeling that in moment
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on February 06, 2013
EvilAngel1490
It's so sad, but I love it!
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on February 06, 2013