Wide Awake

Bmac99 Original Poem whoop whoop! Sorry if it's not very good, it's getting late, and I thought I'd type something up real quick.

published on October 18, 201317 reads 17 readers 12 completed
Wide Awake

Wide Awake

Wide Awake
Painfully, regretfully, miserably awake
But I can't fall asleep
There is just too much to do
And so much to figure out
And so much to regret
I guess during the day
Our mind blocks out all the things
We don't want to think about
But at night
In the stillness
And the silence
And the quietness of it all
Everything changes
Imaginations rush
Thoughts wander
And in the silence
Everything is so loud
So I lay
Painfully, regretfully, miserably awake
Staring up at the ceiling
And praying for silence once more
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Bmac99
Thanks peace_out and DerpyTheGreatandPowerful <3
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on March 29, 2014
EverymanHABIT
Great! It expresses looks of emotion! Your really good even if it was getting late then!
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on March 28, 2014
peace_out
I love it its amazing your poems really express feelings its awesome
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on December 27, 2013
Bmac99
Thanks you guyzzz
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on October 20, 2013
Reploid_Zero
I like it! Two thumbs up!
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on October 20, 2013
madison1
wow! amazing like @jayfeatherlover said! :D
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on October 19, 2013
vintagebird
You're welcome!
Aww, thanks!
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on October 18, 2013
Bmac99
*wakes up*
You're awesome too!
*continues with unconsciousness*
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on October 18, 2013
Bmac99
*face turns red from lack of oxygen to lungs*
*collapses onto floor when you let go*
*stands up*
Thank you so much! It really means alot!
*passes out*
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on October 18, 2013
vintagebird
Hehe.....just to sum it up, YOU ARE AWESOME!
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on October 18, 2013
vintagebird
THIS POEM IS AMAZING!!!!!!! *goes up to you and hugs you so tightly that you think you might faint*
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on October 18, 2013
vintagebird
YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!!!!!!! Stories, poetry, YOU CAN DO IT ALL!
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on October 18, 2013