A love story (true story)

A love story (true story)

This is what happened today with me and my friend and boyfriend. We were going out 4 so long and now I'm so sad he called me tons of horrid names (sad face)

published on December 16, 2012107 reads 41 readers 20 completed
Chapter 1.

1. Shy

I have just come home from a walk. I don't mean to boast but I look really awesome today. Makeup, jewelry, designer clothes (the usual.) My sister rushes in and tells me to come out round the block and play. So I walk outside and see my sis, and two boys. One of them is my boyfriend, Jay. He's so cute! He does/gets me anything anytime I ask and he's so king and a real lover to me. He suddenly runs away behind a garage. Then the other boy (Mark) says he's running away from me cuz he doesn't want me to see his hair???????? What the beep? Florence (my sis) says it's cuz he's growing it long and he's scared I'll dump him if I see his hair. But Mark, Florence and I start playing around. (Baby games like Queen Elizabeth and It) after a while, Jay comes out from behind the garage and watches us play. Then Tina (my friend) walks up to us. She starts calling Jay names (which I don't like her doing) like horse-ass-face and spaz. It happens to (unfortunately) be that Tina and Jay are total ARCH ENEMIES! According to Jay, Tina's been bullying him a lot. (Which I have no clue about!) We were hanging about, watching movies and listening to songs on Tina's Blackberry. Then I started a conversation about Florence and me moving house next month at January 4th (roughly.) Then we all glanced up at my 'For Sale' sign on my gate. Jay was quite unhappy that I was moving away from him. Then Bill and Jake rose their bikes up to us and joined in chatting. Jay strangely hadn't said a word to me yet when he's usually always talking. I said to Bill, Jake, Tina, and Mark that by our new house, there's a really sloping hill, perfect for sleighing in, and in January we were inviting two friends round for a celebration party. Then Mark said he desperately wanted to come, so it was a maybe. Jay was cowering behind his santa hat. He's acting way TOO shy!
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Comments (20)

CrystalDiamond2323
OMG! What idiot was THAT?! You should've told him some words of ur own! STILL THAT IDIOT!X-( X-(
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on May 30, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I feel horrible for you! HOW DARE THAT IDIOT TREAT YOU THAT WAY!!!!!!!! You can definitely do much, much, much better than that!!!!!!!!!!!
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on December 01, 2013
MEGS0316
>:)>:)>:)X-(>:)>:)
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on October 19, 2013
MEGS0316
I CANT BELIEVE HE DID THAT!!!!!!!!!!! WAT AN F'''''''NG BASTARD
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on October 19, 2013
MEGS0316
HE DOES NOT DESERVE U & THERE R PLENTY OF OTHER FISH IN THE SEA.
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on October 19, 2013
MEGS0316
ggggirrrrrrrrrrrrrllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!! if that man had called me an f'"ng watever i was going 2 get all trini on him. { i am from trinidad }
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on October 19, 2013
ChokolatLover
What? Gimme a break! That guy is a total *******! There I said it!
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on August 09, 2013
lolarockyer1234
um LPSeox6 that was boring soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo boring you desereve this and my boygfriend names is jad
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on June 30, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
Jay is such a ba.stard!!!
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on May 13, 2013
AlexandriaMalik
Ok. Look at this comment!!! I am not going to say he doesn't deserve u and what not. (Although he doesn't!!) Don't be to upset about this. Don't lost it ruin ur life. U and Jay just MIGHT get back together. He is probably very sad and angry about something and took it out on u moving away. But still, calling u that is evil. He could just be a mean player. Hope See More▼
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on April 01, 2013
Beauty784
Oh my, he's definitely not good enough for you. How dare he! I agree with Leigh07!!
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on March 31, 2013
blank
You deserve someone better than Jay! Sorry for the question but what does Jay look like?
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on March 31, 2013
chanycol
Like the end but its pretty sad too "cries" i feel bad "wipies tears. Sniff" will he the idoit not u
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on January 20, 2013
LPSrox6
yea thx guyz
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on January 02, 2013
justinlilsis
i understand everything
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on December 18, 2012
Clove
JAY DOES NOT DESERVE YOU, POOR YOU D:
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on December 17, 2012
purplepony3
He doesn't desrve you and is being a right princess about things I know what Leigh07 is saying both sides do have their reasons but he wasn't right.
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on December 17, 2012
twilightfan
He doesn't deserve you
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on December 17, 2012
Nobody.07
I understand how both sides reacted the way they did but it doesn't mean his reaction was okay.. you are obviously better without him.
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on December 17, 2012
JennyBearie
NICE, message me if u ever want to talk
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on December 16, 2012