Mary_chan's first poetry!

Mary_chan's first poetry!

I got this request from Emo_jeff_the_killer_lover!! She is awesome peeps you guys should follow her!!! Oh and this picture was made by one of my sisters.. JayfeatherLover!!! She made it just for me.. im so grateful!! Anyway I hope you guys enjoy.. I'm kind of new at this so.

published on August 06, 2013124 reads 23 readers 38 not completed
Chapter 1.
Killing me softly

Killing me softly

    I gave you my heart
   But you didn't take it.
    I gave you my love
   But you didn't accept it.
   I would give you my soul
    But would you care for it?
   It doesn't matter anymore.
    I feel no love for you anymore
    Your lack of love was
      Killing me softly.
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Comments (38)

awesomenessqueen66
I am so blown away at how great of a writer you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on March 04
Lightstriker195
its good
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on November 12, 2013
Mikaela.Hyakuya
Awww nice
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on August 10, 2013
Mary_chan
ya just tell me your hair color and favorite color and what stuff you like!
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on August 09, 2013
head.cars.banging
Hey I can't talk to you or message you this is as close I can get to ya so can u make a pice of me and you PWEEZ
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on August 09, 2013
vintagebird
Thanks @Firestar
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
Thanks :3
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on August 06, 2013
Anime_Fanguy
Nice work Mary_chan. And cool art JayfeatherLover.
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
Ikr
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on August 06, 2013
Mawwy
wow! They're amazing
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
I'm guessing you looked her up?
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
WOW WEIRD!!!!
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
i'll look her up
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
Cool. But it's as if you actually wrote a poem bout Juvia...O.O
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
I've heard of that anime!
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
The person in "Girl of the Rain" reminds me of. Character named Juvia from an anime called Fairy Tail...
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
I added another chapter peepz
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
Lol
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on August 06, 2013
Mawwy
i understand
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
i don't know my moms annoying me >.>
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on August 06, 2013
Mawwy
*confused*
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
im not understood in my time :C lol jk
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on August 06, 2013
Mawwy
lol! Hahhha
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
hahaha
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on August 06, 2013
Bmac99
I'm a poet and I know it. That rhymes. Darn.
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
YEAH! Lol about the rap artist thing
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on August 06, 2013
Bmac99
I like it when poems don't rhyme. Poetry is supposed to be from the heart and soul. Sorry my heart and soul aren't rap artists.
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on August 06, 2013
Mawwy
WOW! They are amaaaaaaazing! And the best is the last one scared to sleep
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on August 06, 2013
Mary_chan
woah really!! >.<
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on August 06, 2013
vintagebird
They are so good! Some of them remind me of songs I've written...
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on August 06, 2013