The love diary

The love diary

Jess Moore is a normal year ten girl, pretty, has loads of friends, lives on her phone and longs for a boy friend. And when new boy tom arrives at school Jess is sure he's the one. Eventhough he is a good boy in school out side he some totally different....

published on July 20, 2013138 reads 37 readers 16 completed
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Chapter 5.
15th September- 12pm

15th September- 12pm

"Okay I just need to know what happened." Said the bulky police man.
I shivered. Due to the shock I was cold and worried. The police man sat down and placed his warm hand on my cold hand," Now don't worry, you won't get in trouble."
My mind re-winded, in the police car tom had mouthed at me- don't say anything.  

I burst into tears and the police man comforted me. Soon I was unraveling the whole story.

Back outside the questioning room my mum was sat on a wooden bench. When she saw me she ran up to me , "oh Jess!"

Once we were done crying over each other we went to the little office at the front of the police station.
"What will happen to Tom?" I asked scared.
"He will be put in jail. We have look and he has loads of criminal records. Now don't worry, he is in safe hands. I think you should choose your men a little more carefully." Laughed the women behind the desk.
"This is no laughing matter," Cried my mum," Will my daughter have a criminal record?"
"no! Due to what we have heard she did nothing wrong. The old lady, miss parker who was in the shed says that you actually saved the day because that ball means a lot to her. Now let's have a look at nose..."
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Comments (16)

Avienexjel
EHH decente oke B)
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on July 18, 2014
Nightcat
Not what I expected nice twist
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on February 10, 2014
Clove
Aww, wish there was more, cool story!
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on July 30, 2013
ChokolatLover
Choco girl? Lol!
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on July 30, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay guys really sorry in the second chapter says millie ment jess, sorry
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on July 30, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay my story is now fished. Will start to finish my other one soon. Enjoy the last two chapters.
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on July 30, 2013
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on July 28, 2013
purplepony3
Write more please!!!
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on July 28, 2013
Clove
In the description it says her name is Jess, but in the book it says she's called Millie which confused me!! But it's really good please keep writing!! :)
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on July 24, 2013
perrieedwards1
sorry about the mistakes i am gonna put on a new chapter
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on July 24, 2013
iloveawsomeness12
I need to know what happens
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on July 22, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay star chaser
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on July 21, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay choco girl i wait till more people have raed the story though
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on July 20, 2013
ChokolatLover
I want more! I want more! Gimme more!
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on July 20, 2013
Bmac99
I do!
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on July 20, 2013
perrieedwards1
Please ask if you want any more.
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on July 20, 2013