The love diary

The love diary

Jess Moore is a normal year ten girl, pretty, has loads of friends, lives on her phone and longs for a boy friend. And when new boy tom arrives at school Jess is sure he's the one. Eventhough he is a good boy in school out side he some totally different....

published on July 20, 2013138 reads 37 readers 16 completed
Chapter 1.
3rd September

3rd September

Ohmagod! You won't believe what happened to day! Wait, let me give you the back story... So i woke up shattered, cause i was watching films last night, and thinkin- Oh great, fist day of year ten. So as usual i crept out of bed, got washed and dressed. Then i decided well even though we have to wear horrible school uniform, I still can make and effort! So i put on mascara, bit of bronzer and eyeliner and i straightened my hair ... i got breakfast and waited for the bus. On the bus i met up with my bestie Lucy.
"Hey..." I say wearily.
"Hey, what up with you?" She asks.
I sigh," What do you think! Fist day of school! Still there is nothing i can do about it."
We burst out laughing
At school i was moaning and groaning as the two of us trailed along- that's when i saw him. He was quit tall with honey colored hair that flapped in the wind, he had a wash bored stomach and a lovely lopsided grin...Lucy saw me staring.

"No way, do you like him?"
"Yeh obviously." I say fasinated, " any way, who is he? I haven't seen him around

She shrugged.

" He is tom worthy. "Whispered a voice from behind us, we whizzed round to see geek , Emily Shore.
She shifted her glasses" He's is part spanish, and has just moved here. He is hot isn't he?"
We nod...
"i'm gonna talk to him!" I say..

Smiling, i slowly walk over to him however as i'm getting closer my deadly enemie Stella Brown jumped in front of him and started filrting with him!!! Great!
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Comments (16)

Avienexjel
EHH decente oke B)
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on July 18, 2014
Nightcat
Not what I expected nice twist
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on February 10, 2014
Clove
Aww, wish there was more, cool story!
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on July 30, 2013
ChokolatLover
Choco girl? Lol!
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on July 30, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay guys really sorry in the second chapter says millie ment jess, sorry
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on July 30, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay my story is now fished. Will start to finish my other one soon. Enjoy the last two chapters.
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on July 30, 2013
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on July 28, 2013
purplepony3
Write more please!!!
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on July 28, 2013
Clove
In the description it says her name is Jess, but in the book it says she's called Millie which confused me!! But it's really good please keep writing!! :)
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on July 24, 2013
perrieedwards1
sorry about the mistakes i am gonna put on a new chapter
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on July 24, 2013
iloveawsomeness12
I need to know what happens
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on July 22, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay star chaser
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on July 21, 2013
perrieedwards1
okay choco girl i wait till more people have raed the story though
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on July 20, 2013
ChokolatLover
I want more! I want more! Gimme more!
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on July 20, 2013
Bmac99
I do!
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on July 20, 2013
perrieedwards1
Please ask if you want any more.
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on July 20, 2013