The dangerous circle

The dangerous circle

This story is about two friends named Jay and Tobias since they were kids they like to play finding objects, one day Tobias found an old magical book that contain black magic he asked Jay to help him open it because the book has a lock that need to be open with a key. Both open the book and strange force come out of the book to take them forever.

published on July 20, 201313 reads 7 readers 5 completed
Chapter 1.
Jay and Tobias's antiquities shop

Jay and Tobias's antiquities shop

Jay and Tobias create an antiquities shop in their house many people go there to buy antiquities they never seen before or never had. Jay exclaimed very happy "this was a good idea to create an antiquities shop in the how don't you think Tobias?" Tobias answered "yes it was a good idea, but remember we just going to use the money to pay bills, the rent, and the food we eat everyday" jay responded "of course my dear friend whatever you say". Tobias knows that Jay love to spend money in everything he see and he always tell Jay that he has to control to waste money in things are not important. Later an old woman came to see the antiquities shop she was looking around like looking for something precious, Jay says "do you need help?" The old woman answered "yes I need help, I'm looking for something especial for my granddaughter today is her birthday and I wish to give her something that never forget" Jay replied "of course come with me I will show you what we got" the old woman answered "thank you dear". It pass like twenty minutes finally the old lady decide for a precious necklace that Jay show her more than five time, but she doesn't think to take it because it was expensive and she doesn't have any money. Jay give her the necklace and say "you don't have to pay you can have it I understand is for especial occasion" the lady replied "thank you so much dear god bless you" the old lady took the necklace with a happy smile then Tobias appeared and screamed "what is wrong with you Jay?", "you're not suppose to give free stuff you must told the old lady to pay for the necklace not give it for free what is wrong with boy" Jay responded "it just a necklace and today is her granddaughter's birthday and she don't have any money to pay the expensive necklace that's why I gave her for free is that bothers you?" Tobias answered "yes that does bothers me because you throughout our money even if you try to help others never give them free stuff because they might think that this is a free shop not an antiquities shop that they have to buy the stuff before they take it to their homes". Jay get mad because his best friend yelled at him only because he did something good to help an old lady.
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kindperson
I love it + 5 stars+ story to favorite
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on July 15, 2015
Jaytheangel
Yeah I use it to put more interesting the story
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on July 25, 2013
iloveawsomeness12
Awsome story and epic pic its the ring from lotr
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on July 22, 2013
Jaytheangel
Thanks, but I have to make some corrections
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on July 20, 2013
Acacia_The_Goddess
I luv your story! Its really awesome!
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on July 20, 2013