Moon Water

Moon Water

This is my first story. I don't know if it's any good. Just read it. I don't care how terrible it is.

published on June 28, 2013not completed

The Guy

The Guy "Luke, do you even know your uncle?" I asked.
"Ummm...Heh...Kinda. He was at thanksgiving once. All I know is that he's kinda crazy. When I was 5, he put me in his lap and licked my face like a dog. Then, he held his tongue out and ran to his car. It was pretty weird. But I was 5, so, yeah."
"Luke, we need to get you to the greenhouse. All this nighttime is making you nutty." said Cloe as she started pushing him down the hill.
"BYE!!" Me and Cheshire yelled.
"So, are we gonna find this guy or not?" asked Raven, picking her fingernails.
"Yes, fine. Ok, I'll look up his name on my ipad....Ooh! Looks like he owns a shop! It says it's....IN TEXAS!! THAT"S AT THE OTHER END OF THE COUNTRY!!! HOW THE HEcK ARE WE SUPPOSED TO GET THERE?!?!" Cheshire yelled.
"No, look. That says Bob. WE are looking for a rob waterson. Look, it says right here that he has a shop on 24th street. Right next to point 6." said Raven, trying to calm Cheshire down.
"Ok. Let's meet a point 6 tomorrow. I can run down and tell those crazy peeps down there too. Bye Raven! Bye Cheshire."I said.
I just sat down and watched the moon. Then I laid down and some of my hair got caught in the river. I just sat. I started thinking things. Like how Luke was separating with me. And how Cloe seems sad. And how Raven seems nice. And how I need to get home right now and drink some moonwater! I ran home as fast as I could, wet hair dripping behind, me, I carefully opened the front door and tiptoed up the steps. I ran to my room and carefully took a drop of moonwater and instantly went to sleep.
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AHAHAHAH DOOLILY!!!! *ahem* :"> Anyway, awesome story!!!! please continue!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
I got my pics from google. I don't have an iPad. I have an iPod touch. Sorry if you thought I did then it was just a typo.
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on August 18, 2013
I really like them, where did u get ur pictures from and do u actually have an iPad, if u do can I ask u some questions
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on August 17, 2013
Whatever. I just write what comes to my head. I didn't want it to have a preamble. The preamble is in the middle of the first chapter. So yeah, whatever.:)
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on July 15, 2013
Very nice story, but it had absolutely no preamble.
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on July 15, 2013
I just looked them up on google. All the pictures I am gonna use are in my photos
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on June 29, 2013
I also love the pictures you use where did you find them?
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on June 28, 2013
Thanks. ;)
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on June 28, 2013
I really like it so far!:)
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on June 28, 2013