Moon Water

Moon Water

This is my first story. I don't know if it's any good. Just read it. I don't care how terrible it is.

published on June 28, 201360 reads 21 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 4.
The Stranger

The Stranger

"H-h-hi creepy v-v-voice." said Cheshire, holding onto a rock behind him
"Go away! Never tell anyone what you heard! Or you die!" barked Raven.
"Hey! Come out and show yourself!" I yelled. Luke was barley noticed. He was staring backwards.
"Luke, what are you looking at?" I asked him.
He just pointed.
There stood a tall, hunched over, bald man. He was wearing a suit and holding a cane. He finally spoke.
"No need to worry. I am like you." he said.
"What do you mean?" asked Raven, still mad.
"I mean, a water person." he answered. And instantly made a slightly jittery ball of water. Cloe ran up and touched it. It fell apart and dropped into a puddle.
The man scowled.
"Now, I know you are more powerful. Especially Cloe and Raven. Though Raven has also dark water in her too."
"Wait, how do you know our names?" asked Luke.
"Well, I have been watching you for some time. I even held you when you were first born. I gave you your powers." the man said.
"You sure are one creepy dude!" said Cheshire.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa. Go back. What the heck is dark water?" I asked.
"Yeah! I want to know about myself! How do you know more about me than me!" said Raven
"me than me. Good one!" said Cloe. She and cheshire fell over laughing.
"Quiet! Now, back to the question. Dark water is not bad, but it allows the user to communicate with the underworld. Also, to make water that is black. Now, you don't even know my name! My name is James Brown." said Mr.Brown.
"Okay, yeah. So now, can you answer our question about the stupid moon!"said Cheshire.
"Yes. The moon. Cloe, you were right. As were you Julie. But you need to go further. Here is a paper for a magic man. You need to see him. He will be expecting you. Ta-ta!" And he left. quicker than an old man should.
"Hey...This is my uncle's name!" cried Luke, who was holding the paper.
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Comments (9)

Kisume
AHAHAHAH DOOLILY!!!! *ahem* :"> Anyway, awesome story!!!! please continue!!!!
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on June 16, 2014
nomnommoon
I got my pics from google. I don't have an iPad. I have an iPod touch. Sorry if you thought I did then it was just a typo.
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on August 18, 2013
enchantia
I really like them, where did u get ur pictures from and do u actually have an iPad, if u do can I ask u some questions
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on August 17, 2013
nomnommoon
Whatever. I just write what comes to my head. I didn't want it to have a preamble. The preamble is in the middle of the first chapter. So yeah, whatever.:)
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on July 15, 2013
wolfness
Very nice story, but it had absolutely no preamble.
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on July 15, 2013
nomnommoon
I just looked them up on google. All the pictures I am gonna use are in my photos
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on June 29, 2013
RozenChara111
I also love the pictures you use where did you find them?
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on June 28, 2013
nomnommoon
Thanks. ;)
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on June 28, 2013
RozenChara111
I really like it so far!:)
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on June 28, 2013