INTO THE WOODS~

INTO THE WOODS~

this series/story is about a girl named, Ally who encounters a monster from a myth can she survive this counter? or is she destined to be just another victim?

published on June 26, 201384 reads 38 readers 7 completed
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Chapter 2.

Monster in the woods~

              I honestly didn't think I would survive that night with all the fog, and the cold, and that creature that probably killed Becky!
   I was just so scared, my sweat and tears were everywhere, I just wanted to go home.
         I begun to think,
                 "Are mom and dad and everyone else ok." I really hoped so.
    I remembered I then ended up falling asleep, I don't know how anyone would be able to even sleep in the conditions I was  in, but somehow I managed.
             When I woke up, the forest was still foggy but I could see, I looked down to find a huge bruise on my leg, and a paper with strange writing that said.
                 "NO ESCAPE." written in blood.
   And sure enough on the paper it had a picture of what looked like the creature I had saw last night.
                 "Was this a note from Becky?"
                  "No way, she doesn't even write like that." I said to myself, as I painfully managed to get up.
    I finally got back on the trial, walking slow and hopping from my leg for the rest of the way.
                                                                   ~TWO HOURS LATER~
               I think it was somewhere around noon when I came upon yet another strange note.
                "What is up with these." I sighed.
      the note had said:
                "HE WATCHES, NO EYES."
                "This is too weird." I kept telling myself.
              Until later that day when I saw the creature again, so I was walking down the path as I said, and I heard little kids laughing, I thought they must have been camping neighbors playing a trick on me so I started laughing and looking around and then I said:
               "Come on guys you got me."
               But then I turned around and I-I saw "IT" again, and in its hand it had a piece of what looked like Becky's sweater with blood splotches on it.
               I screamed and started painfully wobbling and hopping, but it got even closer, then suddenly it grabbed my ankle!
    I was so terrified I held onto a tree for dear life but the creature was so strong, and now it also grabbed one of my arms, I screamed for it to let go but it didn't respond.
                I gratefully a peculiar sharpened stick in the ground and managed to pull it out.
            I grabbed it and flailed it until it stabbed the creatures arm.
              The monster screeched in pain, as a black ooze dripped out of the wound, then suddenly it was gone.
    I realized I had been holding my breath, so I happily inhaled as I once again stood up and started limping back to camp.
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Korra_The_Killer
AWESOME AND AMAZING STORY!!! Keep up the good work.
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on November 16, 2015
Mary_chan
yay thanks im happy
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on July 12, 2013
nomnommoon
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!The picture really goes with the story. Am so exited to read more!!
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on July 12, 2013
Mary_chan
wow thanks that means a lot!
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on July 11, 2013
RozenChara111
Mary, I really like your story, and I think the pictures fine, this is actually better than the other stories i read.
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on July 11, 2013
Mary_chan
dude your so weid haha jk
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on July 02, 2013
Mary_chan
... wow thankyou for the nice advise.. :I
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on July 02, 2013