Sumumu taii: The new girl

Sumumu taii: The new girl

Okay me and my sis wrote this it has my character, geruru, and her o.c ,sumumu. This is introducing my o.c. you can also read it on deviantart.

published on June 26, 20134 reads 3 readers 2 completed
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Chapter 3.

irregular day. The end.

She didn’t know how, or why, she was up here. All she knew was that she was on top of the radio tower, and wanted to get down. She looked to the ground, and gulped. It looked so far away! Even the huge mansion that was near the tower looked like a tiny dot. She stood slowly, mentally preparing for the long climb down. She balanced on a thin beam, tightly holding on to her toy monkey in one hand. A sudden blast of wind knocked the tiny 1’6 tadpole off balance. She started to fall off the beam she was on, but quickly grabbed on to it. She was now dangling who knows how many feet off the ground. She was still gripping her sock monkey, who had almost fallen. “don’t worry Georgie! Boo-boo will save us!” she said to the toy. She could feel her grip start to slip off the beam, and she whimpered frightfully. She did the only thing she could think of in such a dire situation like this. She began to scream and cry loudly.


Keroro and tamama ran out of the forest. They had encountered a deranged animal that had chased them away from it’s territory. Keroro had grabbed tamama’s hand, and they both ran off screaming. They just about dived out of the tree line and into the city. Keroro and tamama felt their faces crash into what felt like a brick wall but just…squishy? They opened their eyes and saw sumumu glaring at them, rubbing the back of her head. “ what the (bleep!) are you two doing!? Going for a romantic stroll in the forest!?” she growled. Keroro looked down to see his hand still intertwined with tamama’s. He removed his appendage, and blushed. “no! we were looking for the visitor, but got chased out by this crazy animal!” tamama protested. Sumumu reached down, and grabbed tamama and keroro by their fronts. She lifted them off the ground so they were eye level with her. “next time, watch where you are going! You ran into me!” she growled. Both keronians nodded quickly. Sumumu dropped them onto the ground roughly. “so, there is no sign of her in the city.” sumumu stated. Giroro looked downcast at this fact. “maybe she found her way to the Hinata’s”, tamama suggested. They all agreed, and boarded their hover crafts. When they reached the house, they ran in to see kururu sleeping on the couch. Giroro was absolutely furious. He jumped on kururu, waking him up. “why didn’t you help!?” giroro yelled. ”oh, back already? That was fast, Kukuku!” kururu laughed. The platoon watched in exasperation as giroro tried to murder kururu.

Dororo was walking through the forest, sighing at the calm atmosphere that surrounded him. He had just returned from training, and was heading back for lunch. He reached his cabin to see a smiley face drawn on his front door. He let out an annoyed noise as he wondered who had drawn on his home. He suddenly felt a pang in his gut, indicating something was wrong. Seconds later, he heard screaming coming near the radio tower. He quickly ran towards the tower, jumping up and landing on the hovercraft he had summoned. He quickly shot forward at great speeds to quickly get to the person in danger.

The tadpole’s hand hurt a great amount, and her arm felt like a limp noodle. She continued to cry as she felt her hand slipping further. The pain soon became unbearable, and she forced herself to let go. The tadpole screamed as she fell quickly, and hugged her sock monkey closer to her. She closed her eyes as she waited for impact. She didn’t feel the concrete split her head open like a watermelon though. Instead, she felt something soft and warm catch her. She opened her eyes, and saw soft, warm, and kind light blue staring down at her worryingly. “are you okay miss?” are gentle voice laced with concern asked her. She stayed quiet for a second, before realizing her savoir was talking to her. She wanted to tell him she was okay, and he had pretty eyes, but she couldn’t. she passed out from shock, exhaustion, and her adrenaline running out. “miss? Are you alright?” dororo asked, scared that she had gone limp in his arms. He shot towards the Hinata’s to let the others take a look at her.


Sumumu had managed to tear giroro from kururu, and was attempting to calm him down. They heard the sliding door behind them open, and they all turned around. Dororo walked in, gently cradling a small tadpole in his arms. Dororo gently put her on the couch that wasn’t occupied by a yellow perv. “who’s your friend?” sumumu asked. “I found her about to fall off the radio tower.” dororo informed. The tadpoles eyes slowly opened, and they went straight to giroro. He was frozen in shock the entire time. “wow! She is (bleep!) adorable!” sumumu exclaimed. “BOO-BOO!” the tadpole yelled as she tackled giroro. “looks like she made a quick recovery.” dororo said happily. Everyone started to laugh at giroro’s nickname, ignoring dororo. “boo-boo? That is TO good!” sumumu laughed. Giroro choose not to acknowledge the others, and hugged the tadpole. “geruru! I thought you were dead when dororo brought you in! don’t ever do that again!” he said. “dororo?” the now named tadpole said as she looked behind her. She saw the light blue eyes of her savior, happily watching the reunion. Geruru slipped out of her brothers embrace, and walked over to the ninja. She gave him a big hug around his waist, and buried her face into his stomach. Dororo got down on one knee, and retuned the hug to the tadpole. Geruru gave him a quick kiss on the cheek, “thank you for saving me!” she said happily. Dororo blushed and nodded, “your quite welcome.” Geruru walked around the room, shaking everyone’s hand and introducing herself. She made her way over to the now standing kururu, and held out her hand. Kururu took it, and gave it a quick smooch. The tadpole looked at him, confused. Giroro was fuming, sumumu laughed, and everyone else was shocked at kururu’s actions. “if you cant tell, I just winked at you. Kukuku!” kururu laughed. That was to much. Giroro ripped his sister from the crazy frog, and started to beat on him. Giroro delivered punch after punch to kururu’s face. “harder! don’t stop!” kururu yelled. This just fueled giroro’s anger. Kururu’s glasses soon broke, and started to tear up giroro’s knuckles. Giroro didn’t even acknowledge the pain as he continued his beating. “boo-boo stop!” geruru yelled as she grabbed his waist. Giroro looked down at the tadpole, on the verge of tears, and forced himself to calm down. He got off of kururu, delivering a hard kick to his side. “you seem rather protective of her.” sumumu said. Giroro pulled the tadpole closer, “of course. She is my baby sister.” everyone sweat dropped. “really? Giroro, Garuru, and Geruru?” tamama mumbled in disbelief. Giroro looked at his little sister, and shook his head. “look at you! You are covered in leaves and dirt! And you are sticky! Lets get you in the bath.” giroro leaned down to pick up geruru. “NO!!!!! YOU WILL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!!!” geruru yelled as she dived between his legs, and ran off. “GERURU COME BACK HERE!” giroro ordered as he tore after her. “Kukuku. A little help.” came a weak voice from below them. Sumumu laughed and picked kururu up bridal style. “let’s get you fixed up you perv”, she said.

So, just as the platoon was getting used to a female on their team, another one was thrown in the mix. But how will natsumi and fuyuki react to yet another alien in their house?
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RozenChara111
I really like it:)
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