Mina The Heartstealer

Mina The Heartstealer

This story is about my Jeff The Killer Creepypasta OC, who is quite taken with Jeff. She, too, is insane.

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Chapter 4.

RP 1 part 3:: The End Of Lilium's Torture

Mina: *steps closer to the Thug leader* It was your idea. You instigated it all...You RUINED my sister first, and then you let the rest of your filthy delinquents touch her. *she wraps the whip around his legs and makes him fall over, cutting open his legs at the same time due to the sharpness of the whip itself*

Thug 2: *still choking on his own blood, which is now pouring fast from his neck*

Jeff: *licks his lips and smiles maliciously* Mm..all that blood...but where's your smile? *he pulls the knife out and carves a smile into the thug's face* There, now you're beautiful too.

Thug 2: *eyes roll back into his head, and he drops to the ground, dead as can be*

Jeff: *looks over towards Mina and the Thug leader, excited by the blood, fighting hard not to interrupt. He starts shaking*

Thug leader: You bitch! You fucking bitch! *he grabs at his legs, as though trying to soothe the pain*

Mina: *stands over him, looking down* I told you...I'm going to make this painful for you. There's no way it could be as bad as it was for my sister, that much is true enough...but I'm going to make you suffer. *she cracks her whip against his arms and torso, tearing his clothes and skin*

Thug leader: You're fucking INSANE!!! *he writhes in pain, shooting her a glare, a glimmer of fright in his eyes*

Mina: Yes, I'm aware. *she stomps on his genital region, making him lose his breath and vomit. She leans down, cracking her whip against his skin several more times before latching it around his wrist and tightening it just enough that his wrist gets sliced off*

Jeff: *watches, nearly unable to hold back any more*

Thug leader: *vomits several more times before looking up at her with more fear than she has ever seen before* I'm sorry! I'm sorry I did what I did to the kid, and I'm sorry I let my guys have their way with her too! Just stop, don't kill me..!

Mina: Why should I show a cruel person like you any mercy? Look around, at your dead teenage boys. I didn't show them mercy, did I? You're no different.

Thug leader: *breaks down into a pathetic fit of tears*

Mina: *bends down and stabs the knife into his crotch, then carves open his chest* I'm taking this out, but not enough to completely remove it from your body. Your heart will keep beating from outside. You WILL feel this. You can either kill yourself, or die from blood loss. *she tosses a dull pocket knife at him* You choose. *she stands and watches*

Jeff: Why don't you finish him off, make him go to sleep?

Mina: *growls* Because he doesn't deserve to go to sleep just yet.

Thug leader: *in tears, he stares at the dull knife, and looks around at the pool of blood his body is making around him. In a panic, he grabs the knife with the hand still attached to him, and starts to try to slit his throat open. Blood slowly starts to seep out from a shallow cut, part of Mina's plan. Knowing that the knife was too dull to do much damage, he would have to bleed out whether he wanted to or not. Within the next five minutes, his skin went pale, and his eyes glazed over. He was finally dead*

Mina: *satisfied, she turns to Jeff, but looks at him for only a moment before heading back to the house*

Jeff: *follows close behind her, still shaking from the excitement* That was awfully creative...you knew he would have to bleed out anyway.

Mina: Of course I knew. But giving them a false hope of a way out and seeing that look of defeat on their face...that's the best part of it all. *she opens the door, seeing Lilium still on the couch*

Lilium: *looks up, her eyes puffy from crying* Th...the bleeding stopped...the bleeding down...down there...

Mina: *walks over and holds Lilium tight* Good...go get cleaned up, alright? Can you handle that?

Lilium: *nods and starts to head upstairs, then stops and turns to Jeff* Thank...thank you...*turns back around and heads to the bathroom*

Mina: *sits down on a chair near the couch, staring straight ahead of her, her hands now covered in blood* You didn't have to help.

Jeff: *looks at her* The fuck I didn't. Lilium is just a fucking kid, she didn't need to go through that. It doesn't matter if she's as demented as us, that's something no child should go through.

Mina: *stares at Jeff* You're awfully soft when it comes to her.

Jeff: *scowls* I'm not soft. *he scoffs* It's just that...she's a kid. Rape is wrong no matter how sick a person is.

Mina: *being in a dark state of mind still, she begins to mock him a little* "Rape is wrong no matter what..." As if you haven't ever considered it. I know you watched me when I was changing.

Jeff: *growls* Your point being? *he frowns at her* That doesn't mean I though of raping you.

Mina: *laughs at him* Bullshit. *she stands up and walks towards one of the walls to fidget*

Jeff: Bullshit? *he steps towards her* What the hell? Don't flatter yourself. You may be beautiful, but I don't feel aroused.

Mina: *chuckles* That's the worst lie I've ever heard. You--*she gets pushed up against the wall*

Jeff: *holding Mina's arms above her head, he presses his body to hers, staring her down* Don't test me. My feelings don't stop me from getting pissed.

Mina: *this sends her out of her dark mood, and she stares at him, feeling unable to move. Her face goes red.* I don't think you're pissed...*she mumbles*

Jeff: What was that? *he watches her face* Well. Look at that. You went red again. Funny, you thought I was the one who was turned on, but look at you. I push you against the wall and get close, and you turn helpless. *now mocking her*

Mina: *tries to squirm away, but can't get out of his grasp* S...stop it. This isn't funny.

Jeff: *brings his face only inches away from hers* Who said I was trying to be funny? *he presses his lips against hers*

Mina: *struggles at first, then eases into the kiss, moving her lips with his. Almost to the make-out point, Lilium speaks*

Lilium: If you guys are going to mess around, at least go into a bedroom...preferably Mina's...

Mina: *sighs* Welcome back, smart-ass.

Lilium: I'm only being realistic. *she sits on the stairs* So how long are you two gonna stand there looking like two idiots about to maul each other in bed?

Mina: *glares at Lilium* You're supposed to be hurt.

Lilium: Who says I'm not? I just took some ibuprofen, I'm just trying to keep my mind off the pain till it kicks in. *she stands slowly*

Jeff: *wishing for once that he could close his eyes again, or at least blink, he speaks to Lilium* It wouldn't matter anyway if your sister and I tried to do anything. It would be too awkward for her to have me staring at her the whole time, what with me no longer having eyelids.

Lilium: *shrugs* That's an easy fix for me. *she goes into her room*

Jeff: *looks at Mina* What the fuck does she mean by that?

Mina: She means she could give you eyelids again. Fully functional. She may be little, but...she's really smart, Jeff. She could do anything. *she walks up the stairs and into her own room, shutting the door behind her*
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xMinaxLovelessx
I'll do best to, I have to work the story around my schedule and the schedule's of my helpers, but I'll post more as soon as it gets done.
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on June 19, 2013
xMinaxLovelessx
Lilium is a trip, I didn't expect to need to add a sister character for Mina, but then I thought it might be appropriate, especially after I found out that Jeff tries to avoid killing children due to his past. :3
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on June 18, 2013
xMinaxLovelessx
Her hair is naturally white. Kind of like Steve Martin. XD I actually decided on her name several days before I even knew what this site was, haha. I like the name Zippermouth :0, it's pretty unique. I'm probably going to have Slendy in it, I haven't decided yet. But I know Jane will definitely have to be a part of it. Thanks! :)
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on June 18, 2013