Mina The Heartstealer

Mina The Heartstealer

This story is about my Jeff The Killer Creepypasta OC, who is quite taken with Jeff. She, too, is insane.

published on June 17, 201326 reads 9 readers 3 not completed
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Chapter 3.

RP 1 part 2:: Revenge Is Coming

*after going and searching separate ways for Mina, Jeff finds her, leaving Lilium still on the look out*

Jeff: What the hell were you thinking? *looks down at the dead body next to her and raises an eyebrow* Well...

Mina: Last time someone said they had those feelings for me, I got hurt. I may be insane, but I can feel. *she looks towards him*

Jeff: *shocked to see that she hardly has any blood on her, he holds out his hand to her slowly* Well fuck that. I told you, I'm not like that dickhead.

Mina: *she isn't sure, but she thinks she catches him blushing slightly. She takes his hand* Well...If you can say that here for the second time, I guess---....where's Lilium..?

Jeff: She went looking for you. She's probably back at the house by now though. *he gestures to the car* So let's go back.

Mina: *rushes to the car, giving him time to get in, and then she speeds back to the house* Lilium! *runs inside, stopping abruptly when she sees the horrific sight before her*

*Lilium is sitting on the couch, blood running down both of her legs, her face is bruised and scratched, and her arms have bruises all down them. Her face is no longer full of life as it was before, but empty.*

Jeff: What the fuck...? *is genuinely shocked and worried*

Lilium: *looks up at Mina* sis...those thugs are back...

Mina: What the hell did they do to you, Lilium!? *she turns to Jeff* Go to the bathroom and look in the medicine cabinet, we have a first-aid kit there, get it and start bandaging her up. Please! *she looks back and Lilium* what happened?

Lilium: I was looking for you...*her voice cracks with each word, as though she has been yelling* and they jumped me...

Jeff: *returns, and without a word, begins to bandage Lilium, listening to her tell Mina what happened.*

Lilium: They kept hitting me...I tried to fight them off...but...

Mina: Do you know where they are? *eyes focused on Lilium*

Lilium: They're...they're still at that same abandoned warehouse...in the alleyway two blocks from here...

Jeff: *finishes bandaging her, and heads out the door, knife in hand*

Mina: *runs out of the house to stop Jeff* Don't! *she wraps her arms around him from behind* they're not just normal thugs, if you try to take them all on, they'll kill YOU.

Jeff: Like hell they will.  *struggles to free himself from Mina's grasp*

Mina: *tightening her grip, she puts her face against Jeff's back, causing part of his hoodie to go wet with her tears* Don't.

Lilium: Jeff...listen to sis...*she sounds empty*

Jeff: But...Lilium is hurt bad, Mina. *turns around and hugs Mina from the frontside* It's different when someone I actually give a shit about gets hurt.

Mina: I care about her too, but...just don't. Not until we can all go. *won't look up*

Jeff:  *stares at Lilium's bandages*

Mina: *turns to Lilium* Lili...can you tell me exactly what they did...? Why are you bleeding down the leg...?

Lilium: *looks down at the floor, and doesn't answer, but starts to shake*

Jeff: *walks over to Lilium and looks down at her* What the hell did they do?

Lilium: *looks up at Jeff and then towards her sister* I never knew boys could be that bad...you always did tell me guys get lustful when they enter their teen years...but...I didn't know this could happen...

Mina: *her eyes widen and fill with more tears as she drops to the floor* No... *she whispers*

Jeff: Did they do....what I think they did? *starts to tense up*

Lilium: *starts to cry* They took the one thing Mina told me to keep till I was grown up...

Mina: *takes off running out the door with a thorny whip that is razor sharp in hand*

Jeff: MINA! NO! *runs after Mina, stopping her* No! You don't need to do that alone! Mina, fucking think!

Mina: *her voice seems even darker than when they talked in the car* They CAN'T get away with this! They CAN'T just do this to my sister and live!

Jeff: Then let's fucking go and take care of it. *looks back at Lilium*

Mina: *to Lilium* You stay right where you are! Don't move, don't answer the door for ANYONE! You wait until we're back! *shuts and locks the door, then runs toward the thug's territory, her eyes glowing*

Jeff: *follows Mina, his knife in his hand*

Mina: *is suddenly tackled by one of the younger thugs, but she seems to have a menacing, dark aura emanating from her*

Thug 1: Hey, Vampire Girl is back! *he smirks* Your sister was awfully nice, even if she DID scream a lot...

Mina: *seems to not even move, but blood begins spilling from the thug's neck*

Jeff: *shoves his knife through the thug's head* Go to sleep.... *blood spurts all over Jeff's face*

Mina: *pushes the dead body off of herself, looking up to see four other thugs standing around their leader* How many of you took the most precious thing away? HOW MANY!? *she is bloodthirsty now*

Jeff: *ducks in the shadows, unable to be seen or heard by anybody*

Thug 2: What are you, stupid? We all had a shot at her.

Thug 3: Like we'd pass up the chance! *he high fives the other thug*

Mina: *she swears under her breath, cracking the whip against the dead thug, showing that she can easily tear them to shreds with it* You see that...? That's what I'm going to do to each and every one of you...*she says this with venom in her voice*

Jeff: *his voice rumbles, speaking so low and distant that it scares the crap outta the thugs* I'm gonna rip off what you used to do this, make you eat it, and then I'm going to kill you.

Thug 4: W-who the hell was that!? *he starts to panic, reaching for his knife*

Thug leader: Looks like little Mina had to bring backup...

Mina: SHUT YOUR MOUTH!!! *her demonic voice echoes* You'll be the first to die, and believe me...it WILL be slow and painful...

Thug 2: How dare you threaten our boss! *runs at Mina with a knife*

Jeff: *darts out at Thug 2, shoving his knife in the thug's neck* You ready? *opens his mouth to show the huge slits he created* I made these so I don't have to smile anymore. I think I should do the same for you.

Thug 2: *choking on his own blood, fear fills his eyes*

Mina: *walks towards the head thug, ready to kill. Thug 3 runs at her and stabs her in the arm, and she stops, looking over at him and shoving a knife into his heart using her other hand*

Jeff: Now, I'm gonna give you the chance to kill yourself quickly and silently. Okay? Or should I do it? Make your death nice and slow... and painful. *licks his lips* Oh, how I just love watching people's looks of horror right before they die...

Mina: *with a hiss* Make it slow, Jeffery...they didn't spare Lilium...*she turns to Thug 4, dicing him into bits with her whip, then she looks straight into the face of the lead Thug* Your turn...

Jeff: With pleasure. *starts twisting the knife in Thug 2's neck*

(to be continued)
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xMinaxLovelessx
I'll do best to, I have to work the story around my schedule and the schedule's of my helpers, but I'll post more as soon as it gets done.
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on June 19, 2013
xMinaxLovelessx
Lilium is a trip, I didn't expect to need to add a sister character for Mina, but then I thought it might be appropriate, especially after I found out that Jeff tries to avoid killing children due to his past. :3
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on June 18, 2013
xMinaxLovelessx
Her hair is naturally white. Kind of like Steve Martin. XD I actually decided on her name several days before I even knew what this site was, haha. I like the name Zippermouth :0, it's pretty unique. I'm probably going to have Slendy in it, I haven't decided yet. But I know Jane will definitely have to be a part of it. Thanks! :)
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on June 18, 2013