The End

This is just a little story I made for you guys. Hope you like it. : )

published on November 25, 201213 reads 13 readers 3 completed
The End

The End

Thoughts drenched me as I closed my eyes. Flames consuming me. The ground some where below me. So far I could not find it. So far away I couldn't see it. So far away it left my mind like and empty suitcase. Nothing to think of except nothing. I couldn't breath. I couldn't think. I had lost my memory and everything that I had loved. The flames grow even bigger ready to fully consume my body. Nothing left but cinders the spark that used to make energy for my body. Then nothing just a dead lifeless moon hanging in the sky the stars are shining in a dim gloomy way. Not a sound is to be heard and not a creature stirs.
                                                        Just nothing.
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wolfness
This is really quite morbid, yet well written. Which is a compliment. Good job!
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on April 06, 2013
kerorelly
That would definitely be what it would be like to be living through the end of the world! Nice job!!!
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on March 16, 2013
Nobody.07
whoa... you are really good at this!! I just read your other paragraph.... maybe if you were to continue this one, you could go to the beginning, tell some heart-wrenching tale, and go back to this?? IDK i just want it to go on because you are pretty awesome!
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on November 27, 2012