Ugly

Ugly

Angel is a seventeen year old girl, who's been hurt by her boyfriend. It's been three years since she last heard from Jake and she still can't get him out of her head. Now, it's her senior year and trying to finish up her school work, a new boy comes to her school who is in all, a senior just like her. Jeff too, has been through a lot in his past; enough to claim him as the "bad boy" and to send him to jail.

published on May 17, 201369 reads 56 readers 26 not completed
Ugly

Ugly

A week before Christmas was the week I was suppose to spend time with my boyfriend, Jake. His mother was going to travel to North Carolina to spend Christmas with her sister, and Jake was going to go with her. He wasn't going to be back for a while, not even in time when we go back to school. A wee with Jake was going to be the best week ever, or so I thought.
I was on Facebook that evening, browsing through pictures of my friends who were already taking Christmas, family photos. I commented on some of them, and then something caught my eye. It was a picture of Jake, wrapping his arms around a girl and kissing her cheek. Curious, I looked for a tag of some sort to see and find out who this girl was, I didn't see no tag or comment with this picture. Within the next moment, my phone started to ring and to my surprise, Jake was calling.  I answered the phone.
"Hello?", I answered.
"......."
"Hello?", I answered again. I knew Jake was there, with somebody else. I heard giggling in the background; girl giggling.
"Hey, Angel?", Jake spoke.
"Yeah?"
"Oh hey, listen, I had to tell you something. Is there somebody with you?", he asked.
"No, just me. Why?"
"Oh ok, hey listen um, I don't know how to say this without hurting your feelings, but I think we should break up."
There is was. Those two words, break up, is what caused me to crack. I felt my eyes begin to water and my heart began to throb as I heard the laughter of a girl in the background.
"What?...Why?", I chocked out.
I heard Jake sigh as I heard him shush the girl in the background. I knew for a fact without a doubt that that girl from the picture is with him.
"Because you deserve better than me and-"
"But I want you...", I began to sob.
I heard Jake sigh again as he began to speak, but I didn't hear him. My mind was spinning as I thought of the girl in the picture with Jake. She was stealing Jake away from me, but yet, Jake has been cheating on me with her. Suddenly, I began to hear what Jake was saying. The only words I heard him make out was, "Ariel, I'm sorry, but-"
With all of this said, I beeped him off and shut down my phone. I let the tears fall freely and I began to find myself walking to the bathroom.
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Quincy
i think i know why u went to the bathroom
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on October 05, 2014
elecricblue
write more!
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on December 19, 2013
elecricblue
what next??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on December 19, 2013
Writerunner
Write more plz!!! What happens next?
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on December 06, 2013
perrieedwards1
good please add new chapter want to raed more
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on July 20, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
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on June 02, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Your so lucky you graduate 2 days before me!!!!!
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on June 02, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
I noticed a typo. In the description it says shes Angel but then Jake says Ariel. Just to point t that out
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on June 02, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Catesonkates don't judge a book by the title or cover cuz ur wrong. My story is a whole lot different from what u just said Lmao wow but good idea tho I might use that for another story
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on May 27, 2013
catesonskates
I have read enough books to figure out what happens next. Depending on weather she is mad or sad, mad, she cuts herself, sad, she takes pills and kills her self. There, the end
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on May 27, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
oh thank gosh! I thought u were leaving for ever. whoo
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on May 20, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
I'm leaving because graduation is next week in Friday and Imma be leaving for college soon bit I'm not officially leaving ill be back on when I can to talk to u guys I'm not officially leaving for good....its just for a while so I can go to college and stuff
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on May 20, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
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on May 20, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
D: D: D:
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on May 20, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
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on May 20, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Steph...you're...LEAVING?!?!?!??!?! :'( D': :'( please don't Steph!! Everybody is leaving now!!! If you really are, can you give a reason? :'(
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on May 20, 2013
starbeauty
AMAZING STORY
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on May 19, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
you're leaveing qfeast for good? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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on May 19, 2013
Beauty784
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on May 17, 2013
Beauty784
Why are you gonna leave!?!?!!?!?! D':
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on May 17, 2013
EvilAngel1490
I love this story, don't leave!!! You're too great to leave!
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on May 17, 2013
WWEChampion20
Stephanie... this story...
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on May 17, 2013
dgreen1
awwe idk want dis to be ur last week on here!
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on May 17, 2013
dgreen1
love ur story so tru
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on May 17, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
I will have all of my stories/poems done this weekend (hopefully) Because next week is my last week that I will be on here so I will TRY and get everything done. I'm glad you like this story. =) Thanks for reading.
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on May 17, 2013
Beauty784
I love it so far! :'(
Poor Angel! This is definitely a story to look out for!
When are you going to post more?
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on May 17, 2013