Surviving 3000 Part 3

Surviving 3000 Part 3

This is part 3! I worked hard on it! I hope you all like it!!! So far: Her brother died, you found out he wants to warn you about something! It's Kinda short! If you have any Ideas, it would be helpful!!

published on April 09, 20134 reads 4 readers 8 not completed
Why?

Why?

“You are here because I need to-” I watched as he slowly faded away, the place was also fading. I looked down at my hands, I was also fading. I immedietly screamed. My brother yelled before he completely disappeared.
“I NEED TO WARN YOU ABOUT-” He was cut off. The ground disappeared below me and I was falling. Screaming, as I fell, I looked at the ground. I saw the entrance to the shelter. I fell onto the ground about 6 yards away from the shelter. I was face down in the dirt. As I got up to dust myself off, the hunters saw me. They started yelling and saying
“Hey! Over there!” They started towards me. I got up and started running towards the shelter.  Why can’t I just sink?!?! Just as i thought it, I started to sink into the ground. I screamed as I fell into the room. The room where Dominic was talking to me. Dominic was on his knees praying.
“Dominic?” He jumped up and round-housed me to the floor.
“Alisha?! Don’t scare me like that!!! You could’ve gotten hurt!” He looked at me with alarm. I followed his eyes to where he was looking. I was shining. Glittering, actually. My clothes were different.
“Alisha, You look different.” I blushed realizing he was right. I got up and dusted myself off. Then a huge boom shook the room. We ran to where Belle and Zta-Zta were. The hunters broke through.
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Acacia_The_Goddess
And yes it does! I love it for the ending! I'll add it in!
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on August 24, 2013
Acacia_The_Goddess
Ya she's an angel
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
Well, sorry if its long but good luck! And hope this helps!
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
A sword then appears, the sword of courage and love. She fights him only to kill him and make him fall in the portal but before he grabs her and brings her with him to the underground. But before she falls in the portal, her spirit flies in the air. She is then a transformed angel. Her sister comes out and she tells her that she loves her. Alisha tells her sister See More▼
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
The hunters attack but she avoids them. She approaches him. More hunters come out but she kills them. She then attacks him and they both fight. While they're fighting a huge portal opens up and she receives a vision of her brother, he's telling her that he just opened a portal to the underground and he'll drag me along with him. He wishes her good luck and the See More▼
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
She realizes that hunters are headed this way so she wakes everyone up. They all hide. She goes out but her sister tries stopping her. She tells her little sister that she is simply going to talk with a few people and she'll be back soon. She goes out only to find a monster waiting for her. He looks just like a devil. She uses her angel powers to protect the See More▼
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
Idea: The hunters chief could be a huge devil and Alisha could be an angel. At first she kills a lot of hunters to protect the others. Then the chief discovers this. While he and his hunters travel to find her, she has a dream where her brother is there. He has news for her. He tells her she's an angel and she has the power to protect. Before she can say anything, See More▼
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on August 24, 2013
ChokolatLover
Is she an angel?
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on August 24, 2013