The Little Girl in the Red Cape

The Little Girl in the Red Cape

One night. Loads of things could happen. If only she knew. I dare you to read on

published on April 06, 2013136 reads 34 readers 19 completed
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Chapter 2.

Build up

After she had given Holly her ice cream, Holly asked, “Can I have some hot fudge on this, please?”
“Course,” was the quick reply.

After Beatrice went back down into the basement to retrieve the hot fudge, she looked back out the window to see the same little girl, only wearing a red cape. She absentmindedly wondered if the girl was playing dress-up as she trudged back upstairs.
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Comments (19)

XXRuby
Fab story, really freaky:D
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on July 12, 2016
R.M.OandB.M
ok done 1 more comin up :)
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on October 31, 2013
MEGS0316
i want u 2 chica!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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on October 31, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
haha potterpoz not sure if I shud no1 else wnts me 2 xxx
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on October 01, 2013
potterpox
continue this!!
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on September 29, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@beauty784 no da grl was behınd her xx
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on July 28, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
thnx fleur u 2 xx :) xx
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on July 18, 2013
fleur22045
Gosh, you seem so sweet!!!
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on July 18, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
thnx hunny xx
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on June 22, 2013
funnydancer
I've heard this story before but this was told better
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on June 03, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
lol fleur xx
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on April 30, 2013
fleur22045
Oh-my *Shocked face*!
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on April 24, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@Bmac99 thnx hun will work on it x
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on April 06, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
@beauty784 yesh babe you were right xx
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on April 06, 2013
Bmac99
I love the twist at the end! If you want to enhance the scariness, let the pressure build up. Take your time, and it will be 10 times scarier
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on April 06, 2013
Beauty784
Wow this is scary. The babysitter is the killer?
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on April 06, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
thnx b xx
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on April 06, 2013
girlonfire
Sc-c-c-ary! :)
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on April 06, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
Comment what you think the ending means xxx
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on April 06, 2013