Is this song good? I need to sing a song for my school talent show so I wrote this song. Is it good? Down into the dark Where we never part Kept in a cage of shadows Souls are lost and souls are found Deep in the ground where I was buried long ago Ashes drifting on the wind Embers burning in the end Let down your hair and smile for the first time I want to see you smile before I'm gone Before my soul has passed on Chorus Up to heaven or down to hell Genie in a bottle, won't you tell? Meeting angels or meeting devils Growing wings or a pair of horns Playing with the dead Souls long gone Where will I go when I'm gone? (x3) Hold me tight now Sing me a song I'll be alright now Since I'm long gone Let me see your face Let me say my goodbyes Let me just say, I never wanted to die I won't be coming back I won't see you again Let me hold you one more time Let me remember the feel of your skin Just let me love you One more time Chorus Was I good in my lifetime? Was I bad? Who has the right to pass judgement, On the moments that I had?