Is this song good?

I need to sing a song for my school talent show so I wrote this song. Is it good?

Down into the dark
Where we never part
Kept in a cage of shadows
Souls are lost and souls are found
Deep in the ground where I was buried long ago
Ashes drifting on the wind
Embers burning in the end
Let down your hair and smile for the first time
I want to see you smile before I'm gone
Before my soul has passed on

Chorus
Up to heaven or down to hell
Genie in a bottle, won't you tell?
Meeting angels or meeting devils
Growing wings or a pair of horns
Playing with the dead
Souls long gone
Where will I go when I'm gone? (x3)

Hold me tight now
Sing me a song
I'll be alright now
Since I'm long gone
Let me see your face
Let me say my goodbyes
Let me just say,
I never wanted to die
I won't be coming back
I won't see you again
Let me hold you one more time
Let me remember the feel of your skin
Just let me love you
One more time

Chorus

Was I good in my lifetime?
Was I bad?
Who has the right to pass judgement,
On the moments that I had?