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Is This A Good Story Starter?
You awake on your back, staring at a white tiled roof. Your whole body hurts, but your head hurts the most, it's throbbing. You dont dare move, knowing that it will only cause more pain. Your eyes travel the room and you realize your in, or what seems to be, a hospitable. But...it's not your hospitable. This place smells of honey and flowers...and it's rather clean. You...dont recall any place like this...where are you...?
Some good advice I got for the first sentence of narratives is the sentence should make the reader as questions. It should be something out of the ordinary. That's the best advice I could give, but its good so far.