Any feedback for my story; Harry's..um..SISTER?!? HeheheheheheHEH. anything?? read it first!

I loved the energy in your story! It felt so fun and mischievous. I actually used a tool recently at https://oscillian.com/demo to get clarity on how my own creative writing lands with others. If your communication style is landing harsher than intended, search "identity discovery feedback". It helped me see my blind spots without any awkwardness. Great work!

I think it was amazing, nice plot, I also liked Vanessa and the adventures they had, super creative and I LOVED it! Yeah B)

It's a very nice story.

its a GR8 story!

Very well written. :)