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Is this a good character for an element story?
Name: Winter Brite
Looks: Brown hair, Silverish glow to it. Light tan skin, green-blue eyes, average height.
Elements: wind and water. (Her father was wind, her mother was water)
Personality: talkative, friendly, kinda secretive
Likes: winter
Dislikes: summer See More▼
Background story:
Up to 14 years before she was born, element controllers where "chosen," put through duels against each other. Her parents-to-be met there when they where both chosen. Her mother-to-be, and father-to-be, alongside his sister and another, changed everything by defeating the elemental council and reuniting the two worlds of un-elementals and elementals. 14 years later, she was born.
Name: Winter Brite
Looks: Brown hair, Silverish glow to it. Light tan skin, green-blue eyes, average height.
Elements: wind and water. (Her father was wind, her mother was water)
Personality: talkative, friendly, kinda secretive
Likes: winter
Dislikes: summer See More▼
Background story:
Up to 14 years before she was born, element controllers where "chosen," put through duels against each other. Her parents-to-be met there when they where both chosen. Her mother-to-be, and father-to-be, alongside his sister and another, changed everything by defeating the elemental council and reuniting the two worlds of un-elementals and elementals. 14 years later, she was born.
CrystalDiamond2323
Lol!
on July 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
YAY!!!!!!
on July 06, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
@MockingjayDistrict i did, but i waa bored so i made this
on July 06, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I thought you ended Chosen?
on July 06, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
I fixed it a while ago
on July 03, 2014
on July 03, 2014
can you review this?
http://www.qfeast.com/story/3054/Rise-of-the-Paragon-Parabolic
http://www.qfeast.com/story/3054/Rise-of-the-Paragon-Parabolic
Rise of the Paragon Parabolic
My SAO fan fiction! This will be about my interactions throughout Sword Art Online (this will somewhat go with the story line of the show) this will be more like a journal
A fan fic on the well known anime : SAO. It's overall really good and entertaining to read. The beginning is kind of slow because we read things that we have already seen in the anime, but it's still key to have some slow parts so we can make connections with the show. It starts picking up good speed 1/3 of the way.
Note: it's very entertaining, but it's in See More▼ a journal/diary format. Sometimes, that format can get very casual and leave out main points and ideas in the story
Overall: good job!!!!
Note: it's very entertaining, but it's in See More▼ a journal/diary format. Sometimes, that format can get very casual and leave out main points and ideas in the story
Overall: good job!!!!
on July 03, 2014
on July 03, 2014
Will y'all review my story
http://mestorys.blogspot.com/
http://mestorys.blogspot.com/
My Stories
My Stories Friday, June 13, 2014 The Island Of Pain Day 1 Hello, my name is John Ramsey Licit. If you found this journal, then you will know the truth about "Death Island". I may be alive and famous, or dead and forgotten. I'm in a small boat on my way to an island that no one even knows if it exists (Death Island). I, unlike many people, believe that the island does exist. I'm on this voyage so that everyone who made fun of me or laughed at me will know that "Death Island" does actually exist. I'm west of the Atlantic Ocean and haven't found the island yet, but something is telling me that the island does exist. It's dark now, so I should get some rest. Day 2 I can tell that a storm is about to happen, because I can taste the moisture in the air. I need to
You should publish it on qfeast, that way it will get mire reads. You could just copy paste the words.
on July 06, 2014
I've already written about three other versions and was most proud of this one ( I'm only 11 and I wrote that when I was 10). Thank you for giving me advice and also for saying nice things about my story. I will edit it as best I can and try to make it more interesting.
on July 03, 2014
I read this story and found myself loving it! A story of an explorer's adventure to an uncharted island. It reminds me of the classic, Robinson Crusoe, only I found this to be a bit more interesting. This story is enjoyable, but I would prefer it if things didn't move as quickly as they did, maybe write more and make the plot last over the course of a month rather See More▼ than the course of a week and a half or so. I found myself wishing for more once it was done! This is a wonderful story.
on July 03, 2014
on July 02, 2014
Chosen
Every five years one child from each family 10-18 is chosen because of their abilities and Amethyst Brite is one of these. She must find out what element she controls and survive the Element Testing.
Ok, like elleyd said on that other page. This story is AWESOME, Good pacing, awesome- oh wait I already said that- But seriously its one of the best stories i have ever read. I would definitely recommend these to others
on July 03, 2014
on July 02, 2014
