The story of 3 ghost children (1)

The story of 3 ghost children (1)

Several years ago 3 children were brutally murdered. They were sent to heavenly host were they are forced to kill anyone who entered and relive there death and feel the pain.

published on August 21, 201464 reads 20 readers 5 completed
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Chapter 2.
I don't want to be here !

I don't want to be here !

Now that you guys know what happened to us I'll tell you my name and my two best friends names. My name is Yuki and I died when I was 11, the boy's name was Ryou and he's 8 and the first victim of the murder, Tokiko was the little girl and she's 8 and the second victim of the murder.

Were all best friends now ! So yay ! But the darkening controls us and we are forced to kill anyone who enters this school which I don't like. We never hang around Sachiko who was the girl who killed us. We hate her.

Ryou's POV

I wandered the halls mindlessly not really paying attention to where I was going until I bumped into Tokiko "oh hey Tokiko !" I said " *gurgle* *gulp* " thanks to Sachiko Tokiko can't talk anymore since half her face was cut off but luckily me and Yuki can understand her "yeah I want to go home too" I replied " *sob* " if she had eyes she would be crying right now "hey it's ok you don't need to cry" I then hugged her "even with half your face gone your still cute" I whispered to her " *gasp* " she was probably shocked I said that. She then clung to my arm just like she did with Yuki which is her way of showing affection I guess. I smiled at her and we walked into one of the classrooms and she leaned against me " *gulp*  *gurgle* "  "I love you too Tokiko-chan" I told her. I don't care if she has half her face cut off she is beautiful ! and if you think it's weird the way Tokiko talks then I will kill you. We stayed that way until Yuki found us, Tokiko ran up to her and hugged her, I stood up as well and walked up to Yuki. I'm not a fan of hugs but I hugged Yuki anyway. We have no one now that were dead and I want to go home ! I'm tired of feeling the pain I felt the day I died...it hurts.

"I know you two want to go home and I do too but were trapped here and there is no way out" Yuki told us, me and Tokiko looked at each other "I wish we never died" I said "yeah me too" Yuki replied "stupid Sachiko" I said under my breath.
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Lucky_the_whatever_26
I have NO freakin' idea what corpse party is... but this was good! But... make it a bit less gory. And in the next one could you tell us exactly HOW the murderer became a... murderer?! And why is she a little girl?!
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on April 05, 2017
angelzx3
Isn't that copying? it is from corpse party atleast write that its from corpse party .
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on August 23, 2014
DragonFireGirl8
CORPSE PARTY
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on August 22, 2014
DarkVampireGirl
I loved this game. It was awesome
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on August 21, 2014
Masubii_Chan
You got it from Corpse Party, didn't you?
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on August 21, 2014