Sunshine.EXE

Sunshine.EXE

This is how I, tails doll came to be... I tricked Robotnik into something me so I could finally be free... and I wrote this because I stole his diary after he died :)

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Chapter 1.

The joy of destruction

Dr Robotniks Diary                                                    11/17/92

On the way to collect the chaos emeralds, I found something interesting... An interesting mirror... When I gave a look at it I found someone or something, that new my name... "So, you must be the evil Dr. Ivo Robotnik I've heard about... You are a really good scientist... But, there's always something getting in your way... like a rat." He said. "That's true! There's a pesky little hedgehog that always ruins my plans and destroys my machines!" I replied. "Sonic, isn't he?" He said. "Yes, how did you know that?" I replied. I'm always watching you, I know your potential... why don't we make a deal?" He asked. "What kind of deal?" I asked. "I can enter your world and kill him. When I kill him, he will be dead in your world but his spirit will go to my world, which is impossible to escape unless a being from my world makes a deal with a being from your world" he told me. "To enter your world I'll need an alive host body. Don't worry, the host won't actually die. He will be transfered to my world where he will be stuck, until he withers away." He added. "Good thing I have tails for you to use then. I'm so excited to destroy sonic once and for all!" I exclaimed.

Dr. Robotnik. 11/19/92
"This is terrible! That monster betrayed me and is destroying my lab! He is out of control! Someone has to stop him! PLEASE, STOP HIM!" End of diary
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Cory_the_Overlord
Hmm... I think that the action scene might need to be rewritten. It seems to be in script form.
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Tails_Doll
The actual game
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Tails_Doll
Also chapter 1 is based of sunshine.EXE
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Tails_Doll
No problem
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Tails_Doll
Also thanks to you I have 10 followers :3
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Cory_the_Overlord
Sorta cringey, and there's a part of chapter two in which it SHOULD be part of the Diary entry (which is essentially the whole chapter) but it tries to break off into an action scene.
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Tails_Doll
Since you helped me there I followed you
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Cory_the_Overlord
Thanks.
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Tails_Doll
For the second chapter I scrapped the diary entry
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Cory_the_Overlord
Alrighty then.
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Tails_Doll
Thanks for the constructive criticism
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