Maya The Hedgehog

Maya The Hedgehog

Hey! This is the story of my OC! ^_^ If you don't care, just go away please =.=

published on January 03, 201511 reads 6 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.
Prologue

Prologue

If you look at the moon, you see his visible side. But the face that nobody knows from Earth, is his hidden side. Each person has a dark side he tries to bury deep so nobody notices. It's the same with me, except that there is a difference. The visible side doesn't know I'm his hidden side, so he leaves me uncovered. Since the day of his creation he never knew I was there when he was in the process of being created. But what frustrates me the most is that he thinks he is the only person to have suffered during the attack.
A copy of me was created to keep company with a girl. Unfortunately, the copy was a robot that looked like her perfectly. She was afraid of the robot and the robot was sent to the discharge of the ship. The robot ran away from the trash and lived his life in the ducts of the ship. The robot may have no emotions but he was scheduled to be curious. During the creation of my visible side, the robot infiltrated the laboratory. She caught something (surely something that was used in the creation of my visible side) and a version of her improved appeared in front of her. The improved version was not complete, so was a bit weird. This version was me.
I was different from the robot and from the girl. When I saw the robot, my first reflex was to kill it. I cut it threads and threw it in the trash.

Me : The world doesn't need two me

Some people find it cruel and sadistic but what do you do if you saw a copy from you? And I remind you, my creation was incomplete.
I decided to spend the rest of my life in conduits, as had decided the robot, to die in peace. But unfortunately, the fate decided to traumatize me.
I saw her end. When she died, I was there. I saw my visible side from the capsule and saw that girl dying before my eyes. I looked at everything in the ducts of the ship. I saw an end. When there was nobody in the ship, I went out for the first time from the ducts and went to the corpse of the girl. When I saw it, I feel sorry for her. But intense rage went up in me. I looked at the empty capsule room.

Me : You'd still be alive... If only you would have liked my old version...

I looked at the other capsule a few minutes and I left on the countdown to its takeoff. I had 30 seconds to enter the capsule.

Me : I will avenge her...

Each passing second sounded like a drum in my ears.
5...4...3...2...1...

The capsule left the ship and I fell asleep after a few seconds.

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Message from the autor (me! xD) : I know this story is pretty weird but I really like it! So if you have NEGATIVE comments, just shut your mouth and go do your stuff. Thank you.
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Jason_the_hedgehog
Sorry if it's boring bruh it's awesome it just started
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on August 05, 2017
Jason_the_hedgehog
I was thinking for ideas make a page to ask you oc some questions
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on August 05, 2017
Milea
Chapter 1 xD
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lizzruano
Ikr! xD
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on January 19, 2015
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on January 03, 2015