The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 201569 reads 23 readers 10 not completed
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Chapter 8.
Entry Twenty Four; June 8th 1820

Entry Twenty Four; June 8th 1820

I am sick of every person. My mum, my father, my brothers and sisters. They all will pay for treating me the way the have. After Ashley died, they started hurting the youngest child. As Ashley used to be the youngest at five years old...but now... That youngest child so happens to be me. I was hurt, they hurt Emma. They cracked her. After my mum found me and my hiding place, she lost her mind. She stole Emma back and slammed her against the wall. My injures do not matter at the moment, all that matters is Emma. I hate my mum.
I hate her I hate her I hate her I hate her I hate her!
I will avenge Emma, she hurt Emma....so I will....hurt...her
Love~
Sara
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Kinnare
One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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simple_sheep
okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Kinnare
Yay okay
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simple_sheep
Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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purplegiraffe
is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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simple_sheep
heh im workin on it ;)
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on October 13, 2015
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Art.By.God
I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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simple_sheep
really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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on October 12, 2015
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simple_sheep
no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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simple_sheep
wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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