The wish of the little ghost

The wish of the little ghost

This is actually a entry of a competition, but is just as the title describes it. It's about a little female-ghost that felt lonely till a little human-boy showed her a fun time. And now the only thing she wants is to see him or better yet, for him to see her. but is that a good idea?... find out while reading ^-^ (I don't think I'll finish the story though... but you can still enjoy)...

published on April 08, 20155 reads 5 readers 0 completed
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Chapter 4.
The end... is just gonna be the beginning...

The end... is just gonna be the beginning...

" The thing looks like a camera doesn't it. well, It kinda is though, only diverants is that it got a emerald as fuel. Imagine, Creatures being distroyed by a camera, That's pretty harsh don't ya think?..
anyway, chapter 4, enjoy" ^-^ :elina

There he stood, All dressed up and ecuipted like a ghost-hunter as Ryan whispers: "...too late..."

Guy: "It's probably time for me to properly introduce myself, My name is Jake, Jake Ghosthunter. My great-great-grant-father was the one who created this device *shows it off a bit* You probably already know what this is I assume. *evil smirks* As a family member I knew you were a ghost."
She became more shocked.
Rachel: "...H-H-How did y-you know?..."
Jake: "quet simple really, when I first saw you were a ghost, correct. You also said something about a sick-ness right. You know, your heart couldn't take too much excitement, well laughing, eating icecream and kissing do make the heart full with excitement and joy. I even had the luck that you kept stacking me for all these years, I mean, what ghost would be so stupid enough to fall in love with a human. atleast, that's what I think what happend..." *evil smirks again*
Rachel fell to the ground in total heartbreak and started to tear up.
Jake: "ow, don't worry princess. Your misery will end soon enough" *point camera at her* "now say ur goodbye"
Just when he was about to shoot Ryan blocked it and got the shot.
Rachel quickly came to him in tears.
Rachel: "WHY Ryan, Why would you do such a thing?!?"
Ryan: "...Cauze I fell for you, ever since you risked your life for mine. I wanted to repay you..."
Rachel: *begins to cry harder* "Ryan, Protecting me for harm was all you needed to do. Even not with the reason to really protect me for My sake! You were the first that ever cared and I'm sorry I got so love-blind, Would you ever forgive me?..."
Ryan: "Ofcourse I will *cough* but promise you will never surrender yourself to a bully again?..."
Rachel: *still crying* "...Pinkie Promise..."
Then he totally vanished as Rachel's eyes grew lifeless and took off her bandage and began scanting weird stuff again...
Jake: "Is miss lovy-dov gonna fight the big bad wolf now?" *points camera at her* "cauze this time I won't miss"
The laser gets shot out of the camera but Rachel could delete it in mere seconds and Jake became scared.
Rachel: *speaks like a god* " Jake Ghosthunter, I here by declare punishment on you for destroying a mere living creature without reason. I here by make you a spirit that will roam the content of earth as forever you live. Now, Be Gone!"
She used all her energy to full-fill the punishment and give Jake a living hell for eternity.
She then came to the heavens to later be granted a new life-form, together with Ryan as Jake will always stay trapped in his own misery. last chapter ahead...

That was intenser and short wasn't it. I hope you enjoyed cauze the true enemy will be in chapter 5; school
So till next time" ^-^
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