Don't cry tonight (Old)

Don't cry tonight (Old)

A backstory of my creepypasta character; Night cry. Warning;if you don't like gore, don't read this! Here's the first 3 chapters! ill be writing more on Friday to Sunday.

published on February 13, 201548 reads 14 readers 7 completed
Chapter 1.
A night I'll always be scared of

A night I'll always be scared of

~11 years ago~

Hi I'm a Lilliana,but you can call me Lilly.
So let me tell you a little about myself.
I'm five years old, I'm very smart, and I have two big brothers
Went off to school, a special school.
And.......oh yeah it's my birthday! Well yesterday was but you
get the point. I have curly dark orange hair, green eyes, and
I have a BIG imagination!


-10:00 at night,I'm laying in my bed sleeping less again-
I turn over to my side as I spot my door.

~hum... I guess my parents aren't asleep yet~

I guess as why the hallway light is on.
I turn back over and tried to get some sleep.But I couldn't stop thinking
about what my parents were doing up this late at night?

~probably watching tv or something like that~

I say pulling the covers
over my head.                                  ----------time skip----------

-Midnight-
    
~ahhhhhhhh!!!!! what was that-th---that-that thing!~

I screamed.
To my surprise,as I covered right eye i noticed that I was crying!

~when did I start crying at night?~

A few seconds later I heard foot steps and then a door slam.
-BANG-
I froze,I swore my heart had stopped for a second.
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Comments (7)

Kaleythecreepypasta
OH OH OH may I help Lunacrafted can I?Like maybe give you a couple of ideas or such?
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Lunacrafted
I love it!
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on December 02, 2015
Lunacrafted
Omg it's been forever since I've been on here. Yes, you can help but I've been planning to rewrite this.
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Kaleythecreepypasta
Okay maybe you could make the little girl a autistic creepypasta...except since she is little she doesn't know she's a creepypasta and she starts to see things but since shes autistic she jst thinks its her imagination but as she gets older she starts to hear them and feel them and things get a little more creepyier..................
DONT CRY TONIGHT(new)?
what See More▼
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on December 02, 2015
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on December 02, 2015
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on November 24, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!
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Lunacrafted
Thank u I feel so happy ahhhhh I worked so hard ahhhh
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on March 08, 2015
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on March 08, 2015
Lunacrafted
The parents are NOT based off of harry potter
But the last name well....... I just like it
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on March 02, 2015