inside the shadows a vampire novel

inside the shadows a vampire novel

this story is about vampires, inside the shadows. hope you guys enjoy it. thank you for reading this story is for my really wierd passion ofvampirs

published on May 24, 201546 reads 4 readers 40 not completed
Chapter 1.

back alive

i lay there in the darkness. suddenly my eyes popped open. i was in a wooden box, a coffin. what was i doing there? i immediately felt a wave of panic wash over me. where was i, where was my family? WHAT was i ?  with all of my strength i pushed the coffin door open and felt the cool brown dirt under dig my nails.
i looked around the unfamiliar place.  but then there it was all the memories flooded in my mind. i died 20 years ago, and i was meant to be dead.
i remember lying on the hospital bed, just like it was yesterday. my mum was telling me to calm down and that i would be alright. well she was wrong. i had died.
just as i was thinking about my mysterious death, when i had just turned 19 i felt something sharp against my tongue.   i had fangs, i was a vampire.
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Shadow_Akira
Please update! It's been FOREVER since you've last updated! Well, take your time, of course. :3 But I would love to see an update up soon! ^_^

Also, it's been, like, forever since we've last talked! How are you? ^.^
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foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin wow. wierd much! anyway did you make any new friends at ur school? and do you know sanya and nethya
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Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Hehe, no problem! ^_^
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin thats a good idea, i might use it! thanks!
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on November 09, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Well, for your story, maybe when the person wakes up, she/he's in an unfamiliar house he/she doesn't recognise. It turns out that they were saved by a person before the tornado was able to cause fatal damage on the character. Later on, they could become close friends.

I don't really know, sadly. Sorry, it's the only idea I can think off...
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin oh cool! so thought of any ideas yet?
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on November 09, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Yes, I've made quite a few friends. I'm happy. ^^

No, I haven't heard of Sanya and Nethya, unfortunately.
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foreverinpink
lol, i will, and i'm awesome, how are you?
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Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Ok, just give me a sec to think about it.
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on November 09, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Yes, it is. He's ignoring me completely and hasn't said a single word to me. Whenever I smile or wave at him, he doesn't return the gesture and just looks away, walking off. Rude, really.
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin and my essay is due in a few days
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin thanks but i dont know what to do next
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin lol! my tution friends who go to your school said that *reegan* said that he's gay and hangs out with the popular girls! lol is that true?
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on November 09, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

Wow! That's amazing! Great start! ^^
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin it's about an tornado. heres what i got: ( feel free to critisize as much as you wan and ideas are also welcome)
here's my 'sizzling start"

The towering skyscraper collapsed into the earth causing a dominos of chaos. One by one, buildings collided with each other as thunder struck and the ground cracked. It felt like all hell had been See More▼
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on November 09, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink

//Sure! I'll be more than happy to help you!

Just curious, what's the narrative about?? Sorry, I get too curious at times. Hehe... ;^^

You have writer's block too?? No wonder you haven't been able to update! It's ok, I understand. Take your time to update! Writer's block is one of the trouble's an author has. I really wish writer's block See More▼
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on November 09, 2015
foreverinpink
@Yandere_KagamineRin lol good job, wer're doing geomatry and im in the higest math group, which is pink! ^_^ yes he did tell me because he comes to my tution, hes celebrating diwali, im so jelly 0_0.
I HAVE WRITERS BLOCK AS WELL! WE HAVE TO WRITE A NARRATIVE, AND I NEED TO HAVE THE best VOCABULARY, AND I M NOT VERY GOOD. ACUTALLY CAN YOU read my essay when See More▼
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on November 08, 2015
Shadow_Akira
//I'm doing quite well, thanks for asking! It's great that you're doing well too! ^_^

How's school going for you? Eh, school's too easy and boring. I mean, I always end up in the highest math group and pretty much get over 75% for each subject.

Oh, did Arnie tell you that he's gone to India and won't come back 'till the end of January next year?? He's already See More▼
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on November 07, 2015
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on November 06, 2015
foreverinpink
BYEEEEE
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on May 27, 2015
foreverinpink
CHECK THE ICON THAT HAS AN ENVELOPE, I MESAGED U... ITS PRIVATE MESSAGE
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on May 27, 2015
foreverinpink
hahahaahahhahjahaahahahahahahahahaha
k ....... ;0
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on May 27, 2015
foreverinpink
yeah its cool! and funny ish
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Shadow_Akira
// Lol.
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on May 27, 2015
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink
// Okay, it'd be nice if you tried them out though! I love their songs!

// This the link to one of the songs sung by them. It's called Electric Angel by Rin and Len Kagamine, originally sung by Miku Hatsune! They are absolutely adorable!

// https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSYoz0JmnZo
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foreverinpink
cool ill try
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on May 27, 2015
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on May 27, 2015
foreverinpink
yeah... cool and guess what!
im writing the second part of inside the shadows right now!!!
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Shadow_Akira
// Really? Can't wait! Your books are great; keep it up!
// Oh, do you happen to know VOCALOID? I absolutely LOVE them and I'm a MAJOR fan. Hehe. ;^^
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foreverinpink
soz, have no idea
i thought my books were bad or something, and if u like vampires i have a friend who has a page all about vampires and stuff itt's:
@ Yourejustavampirelikeme
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Shadow_Akira
// I actually published it on another website but since Qfeast doesn't allow me to state the website's name I can't really tell you about the site. I'm just going to upload it from the other website to Qfeast. I think I mentioned something about it in your email or something.

// Yeah, I had an interest in vampires not long after I finished watching Vampire See More▼
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink
// Some time today. My school had a curriculum day today, so... yeah, everything's going well! I'm intending to work on a vampire book soon!
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foreverinpink
@ShadowAkira COOL u like vam[pires now too,
i mainly started liking then cause they have heaps of great vampire ooks in our library, and besides i love horror!!!!
oh and, u know how ur great at writing stories, u should publish them all on qfeast, and we can talk in school too, on it
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on May 27, 2015
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
// Yes, it is!
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foreverinpink
@ShadowAkira
OMG... OMG...OMG...OMG... SOZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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foreverinpink
@ShadowAkira GREAT THANK U ... I JUST CAME BACK FRM SCHOOL, SO CHILIN OUT A BIT
WHEN DID U GET Q FEAST??????????
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
@foreverinpink
// Hehe, how are you?
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
// Ooh~ I love the start of this story! I can't wait to see what's next!
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foreverinpink
@ShadowAkira thank you, a continued version will come out soon!
thanks
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foreverinpink
@ShadowAkira OMG!!!!
is it you SK sabrina......... ????
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 27, 2015
Shadow_Akira
// Okay, I can't wait!
// Also, if you wanted to know who I am, it's your friend from primary school. :3
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foreverinpink
hi guys this a hort vampire story, if you like it then i will ontinue it!
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on May 24, 2015