Rise of the burning man.

Rise of the burning man.

A D&D story, has a few weird twists but you will make sense of it eventually. This story is also done with my Co-author Dungeon_Master, so if you want the prelude and afterwards, read his story "Blood of dragons"

published on July 29, 201573 reads 11 readers 196 completed
Chapter 1.

The First steps

I was an innocent enough kid, a little half elven who went with my daddy on his trips to and from Lunaris. I had been going with him now for about 5 years and was just returning from our sister city Solaris for my 13th birthday when we were set upon by bandits. My father fought valiantly but the numbers were too high. I hid under the caravan in hope that I would be safe. The caravan started to move, but I clung on, Praying to who-ever was listening.
We finally stopped after what seemed to be a thousand cycles of the moon. I felt people walking all over and searching the caravan. A hand grabs me and by the gods do I scream. I was held in an iron cell, waiting to be killed or worse. After a few days of starvation and prayers to gods who seemed to ignore me, their "leader" visited me in the cell and I knew what was coming so I huddled in a corner, allowing him to grab as little as possible of me. But I felt no hands on me, no knife ripping through my dress. I looked up to see a man in plate Armour, flecked with the blood of the bandits. He picked me up and I rode with him, back to Solaris. His name was Tiberius Kurk, leader of the militia, and he is to be my new father.
I mourned for my father, but I had to keep my mind off it. I apparently had night terrors so I put myself to work and joined the militia with my new father.I worked tirelessly, working with sword and shield, Armour and bow. My terrors grew worse though, sending father in to rages because of his tiredness. this continued on or another two years, then, one night I had a dream, I was in a massive cavern, full of gold and a massive brass dragon in a cave to the right. I move closer, my body out of my control. The dragon lifts its massive head and looks to me, and as I stare into its eyes, I see... I see MY OWN EYES! "Go forth my child of ages, send magic into your world with fire and good. May Nethys guide your way" The dream fades into nothingness.
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Pale_Master
Wazzup @Goldmoon
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Dawnstar
Whatever you do, do not get into my account, or I'll call @Nightmare_Bonnie and tell him to stuff you into a suit.
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KonataAndSebastianWithCakeAndCornets
Why?..... 0 _0
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Dawnstar
Bye, gotta go, and... YOU WERE GOING TO STUFF ME!
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KonataAndSebastianWithCakeAndCornets
What are you running from?...
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Dawnstar
YOU RUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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0_-
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Dawnstar
RUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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-_-
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Dawnstar
RUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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KonataAndSebastianWithCakeAndCornets
No need to beg, i'll just stuff you.
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Dawnstar
Uh.
Thank you...?
That really helps so much!
Maybe I'll just...
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KonataAndSebastianWithCakeAndCornets
He hasn't done anything to me...
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Dawnstar
-_-
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Dawnstar
Ok, I guess begging isn't going to work with you...
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KonataAndSebastianWithCakeAndCornets
I can't fix all your worries.
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Dawnstar
STUFF HIM, @Nightmare_Bonnie , PWEASE!
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Pale_Master
Been there done that. Plus I shut the hack down and I have no-idea how I did it in the first place
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Dawnstar
-_-
Why would you do that?
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Pale_Master
It was an accident! I swear!
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Pale_Master
ok, i am shutting it down
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Dawnstar
-_-
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Dawnstar
Uhhhhh......?
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Pale_Master
Well that means I can now not only get into anyones account, but I can change qfeast as a whole
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Dawnstar
Are you supposed to be in jail, or did you escape?
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Pale_Master
Holy crap I just unlocked the qfeast online script!, I just hacked Qfeast!!!
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Dawnstar
Is it... bad?
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Dawnstar
GASP NOOOOOOOOO PLWEASE I BEG I WILL NEVER SAY A MEAN THING AGAIN! I PROMISE! PWEASE! PWEASE! I BEG!
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Pale_Master
good. I will think about it
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Dawnstar
Hi?
I'm back.
Hi?
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on September 04, 2015
Pale_Master
WAIT! GIVE ME A MINUTE! ALMOST DONE!
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
Bye
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on September 04, 2015
Pale_Master
Almost done...
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on September 04, 2015
Pale_Master
First battle scene is being written
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
THANK YOU!
THANK YOU!
THANK YOU!
THANK YOU!
THANK YOU!
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Dawnstar
*Grumble* Fine
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Pale_Master
good kid, next chapter will be up soon.
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Pale_Master
And now you will never see the next chapter.
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
KID!
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
GAHH!
I WISH I WAS 18!
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on September 04, 2015
Pale_Master
I am 6 years older than you. I can call you a kid.
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
Do not call me a kid, kid!
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Dawnstar
I AM A GIRL MISTER
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Pale_Master
A girl mister?
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Pale_Master
Hehehe
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on September 04, 2015
Pale_Master
*chuckles*
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Pale_Master
*chuckles* And I am a black belt in Tai Quan Do.
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Dawnstar
Hellooo?
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Pale_Master
Hi
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Dawnstar
Hi
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Dawnstar
hi
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Dawnstar
hi
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Pale_Master
Ok then...
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Dawnstar
Something like that.
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Pale_Master
Once and for all?
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on September 04, 2015
Dawnstar
HI! ONCE-AND-FOR-ALL!
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Dawnstar
hi
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Pale_Master
Now.
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Dawnstar
YESSSSS
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Dawnstar
OH COME ON
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
NOOOW?
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
NOW?
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
READY?
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
IS IT READY YET?
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
YAY
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
next xhapter will be up in a min
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Dawnstar
YAY
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YAY
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
YOUR NINE! NO GORE OR SMEXY PARTS FOR YOU!
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Dawnstar
COOL
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
Wah
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on September 03, 2015
Dawnstar
YOU CURSED!
HOW COULD YOU?!
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Pale_Master
What is wrong with cursing?
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Pale_Master
Ohhhhhhh. Wow. Well then. no more burning man for you! You are not able to even read the next chapters!
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
14? 16? 15?
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
Well I am 15 so I would guess you are either a year or 2 younger
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
@Goldmoon I am here
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
Hello? Is it me your looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile.
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on September 03, 2015
Pale_Master
hello!
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on August 23, 2015
Pale_Master
Sorry, computer mega lagging
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on August 22, 2015
Dawnstar
Ok.
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on August 22, 2015
Dawnstar
Ok?
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on August 22, 2015
Dawnstar
Angry_phesant ?
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