Rise of the burning man.

A D&D story, has a few weird twists but you will make sense of it eventually. This story is also done with my Co-author Dungeon_Master, so if you want the prelude and afterwards, read his story "Blood of dragons"

published on July 29, 201516 reads 9 readers 45 completed
Rise of the burning man.
Chapter 1.

The First steps

I was an innocent enough kid, a little half elven who went with my daddy on his trips to and from Lunaris. I had been going with him now for about 5 years and was just returning from our sister city Solaris for my 13th birthday when we were set upon by bandits. My father fought valiantly but the numbers were too high. I hid under the caravan in hope that I would be safe. The caravan started to move, but I clung on, Praying to who-ever was listening.
We finally stopped after what seemed to be a thousand cycles of the moon. I felt people walking all over and searching the caravan. A hand grabs me and by the gods do I scream. I was held in an iron cell, waiting to be killed or worse. After a few days of starvation and prayers to gods who seemed to ignore me, their "leader" visited me in the cell and I knew what was coming so I huddled in a corner, allowing him to grab as little as possible of me. But I felt no hands on me, no knife ripping through my dress. I looked up to see a man in plate Armour, flecked with the blood of the bandits. He picked me up and I rode with him, back to Solaris. His name was Tiberius Kurk, leader of the militia, and he is to be my new father.
I mourned for my father, but I had to keep my mind off it. I apparently had night terrors so I put myself to work and joined the militia with my new father.I worked tirelessly, working with sword and shield, Armour and bow. My terrors grew worse though, sending father in to rages because of his tiredness. this continued on or another two years, then, one night I had a dream, I was in a massive cavern, full of gold and a massive brass dragon in a cave to the right. I move closer, my body out of my control. The dragon lifts its massive head and looks to me, and as I stare into its eyes, I see... I see MY OWN EYES! "Go forth my child of ages, send magic into your world with fire and good. May Nethys guide your way" The dream fades into nothingness.
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Kitsunee
Wazzup @Goldmoon
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on September 10, 2015
Kitsunee
Now.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
next xhapter will be up in a min
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
YOUR NINE! NO GORE OR SMEXY PARTS FOR YOU!
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
@Goldmoon I am here
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello? Is it me your looking for? I can see it in your eyes. I can see it in your smile.
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on September 03, 2015
Kitsunee
hello!
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on August 23, 2015
Kitsunee
Sorry, computer mega lagging
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Don't worry @Dawnstar. I got your back
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Hello friend
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
@Dawnstar
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on August 22, 2015
Kitsunee
Why must this happen
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I live
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on August 17, 2015
Kitsunee
I HAVE RISEN
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on August 14, 2015
Kitsunee
I is here.
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on August 07, 2015
Kitsunee
Me ok!
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
dag nabbit
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Oh, So I am now alive and you be dead, an annoying conundrum.
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
You seen the new chapters ;)
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Me no dead :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
Just woke up. I'm alive :P
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on August 06, 2015
Kitsunee
See ya.
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Time for bed eh?
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Nice
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Awesome
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wait till chapter four, things start getting actiony
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
No, but I have won a few comps
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Hehehe, trust me, there is plenty more to come
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Wasn't finnished, read it again
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on August 05, 2015
Kitsunee
Yeah, thought I'd give ya a bit more
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on August 05, 2015
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