Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014238 reads 33 readers 16 not completed
Chapter 1.
How I Die

How I Die

I stumble through the dark, misty forest. He must be here somewhere! I gaze at the knife in my right hand. One stab. Then it's all mine. He would understand. If he had to kill me for money, I'd understand. That's what best friends are for...I think.
"Steph?! Stehania?! You there?!" Come's a voice. It's him. I slowly step over the crisp leaves behind the bushes, the light of the moon showing me where to go. Just a little further. "STEPHANIA!!" He screams. I'm so sorry. I close my eyes and take a deep breath. I wait till he turns around. I'm so sorry Dominick. I'm sprinting. Towards my best friend, knife in hand. Dominick spins around, struck with fear.
"I'm so sorry," I murmur.
"Stephania," Dominick shouts with disbelieve. Then, I'm flying through the air. What?! This wasn't part of the plan! The ground etches closer.
THUD!
I sprawl around the floor, blood everywhere. Dominick looks at me, horrified.
"Stephania?! Are you alright?!" He calls. Then his face goes straight. "You tried to kill me, I guess it's what you deserve," Then he turns around and begins to walk away.
"No," I groan. "Please-" I cough and splutter. The edge of my vision goes black. "Dom..in....ick,"

The last thing I see, is my best friend walking away. Leaving me to die with a knife in my stomach. He could have saved me. Everything, black. Everything, dark. Everything, dead, including me.
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AnimatronicHeart
Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23
EyelessIngrid
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Love. Love. LOVE IT!
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on December 10, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Sarbar1010
Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them.
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yay!!
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on December 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
NeonTiger
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! )
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on October 20, 2014
Aliyss
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I like it it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Jeweled_Feather
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014