We need to talk (Revamped)

We need to talk (Revamped)

Originally, I had a little story on here called "We need to talk" but I realize that I literally gave out WAY too much personal info in it, so I took it down. I know that 25 people already saw it, but I don't want anyone else to see it. It's not that I'm being a coward because some of my opinions were a bit controversial, it's because I gave out names of people I go to school with and family members so I took it down. Anyways, it's basically the same as the original, so if you read it, you know that I'm a 13 year old girl who is trying to "change the world," one rant at a time. Just kidding, but I am trying to get people to hear me out. So, if you don't like an ignorant selfish girl writing, you might want to get off. Okay, I'm not completely ignorant. Bye.

published on February 26, 2016145 reads 27 readers 66 not completed
Chapter 1.

INTRO: My name is Mack. (Warning: it's boring, so just wait for chapter 2 for the real stuff to start if you don't wanna read)

I GUESS this story could be like some online diary that I'm sharing to the world via the Internet. Okay, so it's not a very good system because I'm literally breaking all the rules with my "diary" but I couldn't care less. I'm doing a little into to who I am. :) Enjoy.

Okay, as you read in the description, if you even bothered to read, you would know that I'm a 13 year old girl. I'm going to list some of my known traits, and if you decide you don't want to deal with how I am after reading, please exit via the little x found on your tabs or the top right hand corner. You can even leave by simply clicking the back arrow. Okay, I'm done giving you a lesson on your computer. Let's do it.
My nickname is Mack or Kenzie, so you can call me those or you can even use harsher names if you prefer. I'm open to anything. I'm 13, and I am a firm believer that one's opinions should be voiced, and that all opinions shall be taken into consideration. I am also a believer that if someone says something that you don't agree with, you have every right to disagree and debate with them your opinions.
I've been called selfish by my parents before, and I'm a little hot-headed. They say it has something to do with my red hair. :( But my hair isn't bright orange or even a pretty deep red. It's brown and slightly red with blonde baby hairs and natural blonde highlights. So people need to quit calling me carrot top and ginger lion. D:
I'm also afraid of confronting my emotions but I try to do it anyways. I have minor anxiety, which I have not been diagnosed with; I'm going solely based off of my experiences so please feel free to ask me for advice if you feel but I can't give you any medical advice and you shouldn't base decisions off of my advice. Okay, anyways, I am the kind of girl who will do anything for her friends and family. I get VERY angry when someone hurts the people I love.
I'm not very successful with relationship type things, but I've had 2 boyfriends I consider actual relationships. I consider it to be real when I have dated them for at least 3 months, but it doesn't mean that I think I love him.
I identify as a straight female. I was born female and I am straight, but I have no negative things to say to the LGBT community because I believe love is love. If you're LGBT, that's awesome because I love you no matter what. I feel the being LGBT shouldn't be a big deal, it should just be as natural as being straight.
I love to read and write, but my stories typically suck and I never really finish them. The only stories I have finished that I'm proud of is (self promo alert) Dear Alison and Dear Love. It's a series of short stories, and I might consider writing the last book, Dear Life, if you guys want me to. I like reading fiction books, and nothing but fiction books. Nonfiction books, I feel, are a waste of time and painfully boring, no matter how they write it. I don't care about the facts, I want some kind of made up action and romance and crap.
Speaking of romance, my estrogen seems to make me literally obsessed with romance books. Some of my top picks are Twilight, the Selection series, and even the Tiger's Curse series.
I'm obnoxious and I stand by my opinions. I guess that's why people call me stubborn. I could also literally sit and argue with a brick wall. I think I just like to pick fights.
I don't really like animals. I know it sounds bad, but it's true. I like some animals, but only mine and I don't even like most of my pets (I have 2 cats and 1 dog) I loved my grandma's dog, Bubbles, but he passed away sadly. :( I loved my amazing beagle Daisy but she was hit by a truck. (A chicken truck if you want to be more specific) I love my cat that I have now, his name is Kitty and he's very fat and orange. I don't like my other cat, Mika, because she is mean and eats food off the counter and cut my chest open even after we cut her nails. I don't like my dog Bella because she smells, no matter how many times we bathe her and she pukes a lot.
I'm the kind of person who rants A LOT. You guys probably know that already. I have a rant coming very soon that angers me just thinking about it.

Did you really make it this far? Wow, congrats! I bored myself just writing this, so if you did make it, I love you! I love the people who didn't make it or didn't even read this chapter because they saw the title. I love everyone. Okay, Mack, stop getting all weird and sappy, you might cry.
xx Mack
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SuperSnow
MY ROAST WAS FIRE (flame ignites)


JKJK
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on April 19, 2016
vive_la_revolution
I now want to kill THAT JERK as well as T. -_-
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SuperSnow
Yeah I hate them.
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on March 12, 2016
vive_la_revolution
Yes. Words are extremely powerful.
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on March 12, 2016
Kanya888
@ The abortion rant: Yes
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SuperSnow
Also, I meant by health problems if it was like my stepmom and sister where, if she gets pregnant, her and the baby would die.
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Kanya888
Yeah. If that's the case, it's up to the mother to decide.
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SuperSnow
Glad you agree with me.
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Kanya888
*smiels*
THe only thing I'd change if I had to change your chapter would be talking about whether abortion would be okay if there would be health problems, but other than that I agree whole-heartedly.
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on March 03, 2016
vive_la_revolution
*applauds*
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SuperSnow
Thank you, thank you. *bows* But seriously, I feel very strongly about this.
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vive_la_revolution
Yeah, I can tell. ^_^
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on February 28, 2016
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on February 28, 2016
vive_la_revolution
I completely agree with that last chapter. Except I know several people on here who really do self harm and struggle with depression.
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SuperSnow
I know, those people are awful.
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SuperSnow
Exactly. Why would they ruin their body if they could do something way better and actually beneficial for themselves and EVERYONE?
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vive_la_revolution
Exactly! And they're making the people who are actually depressed feel even worse.
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SuperSnow
Yeah, I think those people need a slap in the face and someone yelling "STOP" in their ear, but that sounds a little harsh.
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vive_la_revolution
Yeah. It's harsh, but sometimes I seriously want to just whack them upside the head and scream at them.
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SuperSnow
I know people who do that too. I know people who really are struggling, and I try to help, and then I see attention seekers who aren't depressed at all.
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vive_la_revolution
Exactly. It really ticks me off.
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on February 28, 2016
vive_la_revolution
I actually really like the Dress and now the Jacket controversies. XD It's interesting!
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SuperSnow
Oh, are you home schooled? Or was it just something fun to do at home?
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on February 28, 2016
SuperSnow
I hate it just because of how much people argue about it. XD But I do see how it is interesting. I just get angry when people make such a big deal about worthless little things like that.
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vive_la_revolution
Yeah, that makes sense. No one that I've ever talked to has really made it a huge issue. My family saw it and pretty much just based the next week's homeschool science plan on it. It was turned into schoolwork. But it was interesting.
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on February 28, 2016
vive_la_revolution
You remind me of Girl Online.
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SuperSnow
Well, I don't mean to cut the conversation off but I'm about to start a new story, and I'm just going to do that for now. We should definitely talk again soon if you want.
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vive_la_revolution
Okie doke. And yeah, definitely!
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on February 26, 2016
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on February 26, 2016
SuperSnow
Yeah, things are pretty messed up around here. XD
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vive_la_revolution
XD Sounds like it.
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on February 26, 2016
SuperSnow
Trust me, the nightmare is more like living Hell. We're convinced she's either Satan spawn right out of her mother or she was possessed by the lady who died in our house 5 years ago.
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SuperSnow
Yeah parents tend to do annoying things like that. My sister is also the worst kid ever so it makes it 10 times worse.
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vive_la_revolution
Ugh. Now I wish that I could teleport there and help you out. It sounds like a nightmare.
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SuperSnow
My sister is only 1, and I'm also incredibly sick but I still had to babysit her for 4 hours this morning and I have to later tonight too. What a great way to start my weekend. :|
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vive_la_revolution
Ugh. I don't understand why parents do that sometimes. :/
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SuperSnow
I think it's amazing. And sorry I took so long to answer, I was watching my baby sister for my parents for a minute.
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vive_la_revolution
Thanks. ^-^

Yeah, I get that. Babysitting is always my job in this family. Luckily, the youngest is now seven, so it's not as bad.
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SuperSnow
Anytime :3 I just started reading The One and I'm impressed. Not that I expect anything less than amazing from you, because, let's face it, you're an amazing writer.
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vive_la_revolution
You really, actually think that? Thank you SO much. I didn't think that "The One" was really that good..
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SuperSnow
And yes, your stories are amazing.
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vive_la_revolution
Really? Thanks sooo much. That means a lot to me. ^-^
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SuperSnow
Holy crap so much happiness coursing through my veins.
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SuperSnow
Also, I love your stories too.
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vive_la_revolution
Really??
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SuperSnow
Ahhhh I'm screaming internally. I've never been anyone's inspiration even a little bit, so that means a lot.
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vive_la_revolution
XD
I don't understand why. For real, you are the type of writer that I want to be.
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SuperSnow
Yeah me too. Also, thanks for reading my stories. It means a lot. I just figured no one cared about them.
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vive_la_revolution
No problem! I have been absolutely in love with pretty much all of your stories ever since I first read them, which was a long time ago. As a matter if fact, you've been a bit of an inspiration to me.
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SuperSnow
Some people just like to put others down by targeting what they love I guess.
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vive_la_revolution
I guess so. I hate when people do that.
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SuperSnow
You're so nice, and I thank you very much for your kind words. Most people aren't quite so nice and you seem like an amazing person.
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vive_la_revolution
Aww, thanks. ^_^ I don't understand why anyone would say anything different.
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SuperSnow
Awe thank you SOOOOOOO much. (feelin loved and stuff)
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vive_la_revolution
You're welcome; it's true!
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SuperSnow
Wow, thanks. I feel loved when people say they like my writing.
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vive_la_revolution
Same here. ^_^ But seriously, your stories are freaking awesome and you need to be famous ASAP.
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SuperSnow
Oh cool, I'll check it out. I've had a little bit of my writing published before because my mom writes for some magazine thing and they published me because I wrote like 1000 words about something, and they liked it, but I'm thinking about an actual book for people to read. So thanks, I'll try Amazon.
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vive_la_revolution
Okay, awesome! Tell me as soon as you do get published; I will buy your books then and there.
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SuperSnow
Thanks I'm trying to improve my writing and my dream is to get published.
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vive_la_revolution
Same here. Writing is AWESOME! I can totally see you as a professional writer. If you're having trouble getting published, try Amazon. I think that they have some sort of program for publishing e-books for free.
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SuperSnow
Oh okay. Cool. I guess mine could be anonymous but people know my name and my face soooooo. But that's cool, I might read that.
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vive_la_revolution
Yeah, you should.

Also -- I LOVE your writing.
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SuperSnow
I have no clue who that is. Is it a good thing?
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vive_la_revolution
It's a book I read about a girl that ran an anonymous blog online. And absolutely!
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