The Vortexman

The Vortexman

This is my story Vortexman, he is a superhero I created. This is just my Prologue for the story. Hope you enjoy!

published on May 013 reads 3 readers 2 not completed

Prologue

Prologue

        Long ago, on the planet Krypton,  A superhero came to life. His parents, Vora, and Texi, Were living there. Soon, Vora gave birth to little Vortex. As Vortex grown, the planet started getting weaker and weaker, after the planets hero Superman had left. One day, Fire became falling from the sky destroying everything. Vortex saw everything. Fire, burning, destruction, was all he saw. He and his mom hid, while Texi, went to fight the fire and help the people with the other men. The red flower they called it, was full of light and dark. It helped the people stayed warm, and gave them power. But when they disobeyed it, it darkened Creating what happened that second. It happened before, long ago. Called “The Darkened War”. The red flower grew bigger and bigger, and soon all the men were burning in the red flower flames. When Vortex and Vora were hiding, they were scared and frightened. Everything was happen ending right in front of him. It was terrifying. Vora soon left Vortex there and went to look for Texi, and soon saw his ashes on the ground. She screamed “TEXI!!!!” As loud as she could, and Vortex heard it. He knew what happened. His mother was standing there mourning, when the red flower burned behind her. It flamed everywhere. She was trapped, and soon she was burning in the flames. Her one last thought was that Vortex will go to the other planet Earth safely, and use his powers for good.  After that they called the war “The Red Flames” and no one spoke of it again. Vortex stayed there safely, until it ended. He got out, looking at the destroyed city. The picture. The scene stayed in his mind forever. He went safely to Earth, and was found by a lady who happened to be walking by. She called the orphanage, and told them about Vortex. She asked his name. He said Texi after his father, and never said his name again. He stayed in the Orphanage for 20 years, until he left. He wanted to use his powers for good and never repeat what had happened again. He used his power for good, and found anther power he has was Telekinesis. He was called Vortexman. His only weakness was The Red Flower..
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ChocoLove139
love the story honest but, you do know Krypton blew up after Superman left. Also Im really confused. the origin from superman what kinda Different. Sorry
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on May 02
UmbreonGaming
Cool!!
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on May 01